Penname: pettybureaucrat [Contact] Real name: Alan Huff
Member Since: 05/03/2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Real life petty bureaucrat for the Feds, recently retired.

Vietnam veteran.

3 kids, 2 grandkids

Love Harry Potter and HP fanfiction

Inveterate Harry/Ginny shipper.  Like Harry/Luna and Harry/Luna/Ginny (Go, Flaming Nargles).  I think Hermione can do better than Ron. 

 


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Within You, Without You by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Unless time had changed things very much, she knew the intense gaze of those green eyes meant that he wanted her as much as she did him.

“Gin?” Harry said, as one hand reached up to stroke her hair, too intimate for a friend.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63280 Read Count: 22585
[Report This] Published: 06/26/2006 Updated: 06/22/2007
Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Every Little Thing

oh, a very sweet and erotic chapter.  I'm looking forward to the next one.  Please update soon.

Author's Response:

'Sweet and Erotic' - I think that's what I'm goin for . Thank you!!

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/2006 Title: Chapter 5: For you Blue

Aw, this was so, so sweet!!  Harry and Ginny have to get over themselves and just say it, 'I love you!'  I love them walking in on Arthur and Molly.  What will Arthur and Molly say when they walk in on Harry and Ginny, a scene I hope to see soon!  And, of course, what will all the 'protective' brothers have to say!  Update soon!

Author's Response:

LOL   I think Mr. and Mrs. W have a say nothing/see nothing policy at this point. They just want to live the rest of their lives in peace.

Poor Harry really has a hard time with love. Can you imagine never hearing your whole childhood. Heartbreaking. Ginny is giving him time. :)

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/2006 Title: Chapter 6: All Together Now

Great chapter.  So, George is gay?  Very interesting.  Loved the Weasley brothers confrontation!  Especially Percy reading Harry's guilty thoughs.  Bill's punishment of Charlie was classic!  And Tonks smacking his bare butt was a hoot, especially her explanation of how often she'd seen it!  Molly's comment was just great!  Now, the answer to the $64 question is?!?!

Author's Response: Yep, he sure is! :D  Which isn't at all derogotive to me, just a challenge for his and the rest of the character - and one that you don't typically see in your average H/G fic. I'm glad you liked the the Charlie bit, I smiled a lot while writing that. Good Tonks, eh? heehee. ....ahh, yes the question....

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/24/2006 Title: Chapter 7: Getting Better

An excellent chapter.  I've always wondered about Tom and Ginny.  Of course, Ginny didn't help her rep by dating around all those years.  So, they may finally do the deed, huh!?  Oh, I can hardly wait!!  Harry's discussion with Mr. Weasley was a classic!  Now, I can't wait to hear his discussion with her brothers when they return!

Author's Response: Aww -you really think so? Poor Ginny only had a few boyfriends when she was 14-15, over two school years. I highly doubt she even slept with them. I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story. Harry is just itching to tell of her brothers, isn't he? Hee.

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/01/2006 Title: Chapter 8: Two Of Us

Oh, you're a terrible tease!  As bad as Harry!  I'm surprised Ginny didn't just growl and rape him.  A very erotic love scene, very well written.  A good chapter overall.

Author's Response: *snort* This Harry is pesky that way, isn't he? I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Carry That Weight

A most entertaining and informative chapter.  Molly and Arthur, good grief!! 

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed. I really appreciate your comments - thank you!

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/2007 Title: Chapter 10: In My Life

Very good chapter.  You handled Lee and George 'coming out' very tastefully and very well.  Naughty Ginny!  What if Harry had lost control?  How long until the honeymoon!?  I don't know how much longer I can wait for the two of them to get it on!  Very well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Ginny's already shown her patience with Harry and his 'stupid noble reasons.' He's trying so hard. And - hee, they are both very good fliers ;)

I know, believe me, the wait is killing me too! 

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/19/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Don't Let Me Down

YOu're really making us wait for the wedding night, aren't you.  I kind of liked the drunk Ginny.  Now, as long as she doesn't get smashed at her reception.  Update soon.

Author's Response: Heh. Well, yeah, I sort of am. It wasn't my intention to be like that, but there are so many loose ends to tie up. I've never written drunkeness to quite that extent before, I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/29/2007 Title: Chapter 12: Here, There and Everywhere

Oh, wouldn't you know that Harry would have to put up with all the 'GUY" stuff.  I wonder how his arm would feel if her brothers knew what had gone on only a couple of hours before hand?  Or some other part of his anatomy?  And now?  At last?!  The WEDDING NIGHT?!?!   Update soon.

Author's Response: Six boys in the family -Harry is just drowning in the testosterone! Heehee - to your prosition. :P Yes, yes! Finally the wedding night! I promise. :)

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/23/2007 Title: Chapter 13: Across The Universe

Beautiful, happy ending!  Very erotic wedding night without being too smutty!  Very well done!

Author's Response: Oh wonderful, thank you! I was just going for smutty, but I'm glad it was actually 'erotic'! lol - thanks for reading!

Love Biscuits by Jenadamson Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Ron bakes a batch of biscuits that leads to a very interesting evening.  Written Pre-HBP
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5301 Read Count: 1173
[Report This] Published: 07/13/2006 Updated: 07/13/2006
Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/14/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoyed it very much.  Nice love scene between Harry and Ginny (my favorite couple), hot and smutty.  Nice to see Ron WANT his sister with someone!  Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Unwrapped by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry doesn't have much time to give Ginny her birthday present.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Ficlet, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1955 Read Count: 1060
[Report This] Published: 07/20/2006 Updated: 07/20/2006
Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm, reminds me of when MY kids were little.  Unfortunately, we couldn't lock the door!  Very sweet and sexy.

Author's Response: Thank goodness for magic. It helps with the locked door, but those little buggers stil ruined Harry's morning. heh Thank you!!

Rhapsody by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Tonks makes sure Ron is a very good boy.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Professor Sinistra, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: BDSM, D/S, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1644 Read Count: 883
[Report This] Published: 07/22/2006 Updated: 07/22/2006
Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Rhapsody

OH, I don't like S&M but I LOVED this!  Hot, HOT, HOT!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

Dawn's Early Light by inell Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe Burrow is always quiet in the hours following dawn.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Ladies Room
Characters: Fleur Delacour, Hermione Granger
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3353 Read Count: 5436
[Report This] Published: 07/28/2006 Updated: 07/28/2006
Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/29/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very erotic.  a nice follow on would be fleur getting to observe someone (harry, bill) deflowering Hermione, since she said it would turn her on.  think about it.

Chocolate Bliss by coffee_n_cocoa Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Some people claim chocolate is an aphrodisiac.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Charlie Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1214 Read Count: 1207
[Report This] Published: 07/31/2006 Updated: 07/31/2006
Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/17/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's true, you know!  Chocolate is an aphrodesiac!  Hot and sexy, downright lurid in fact!  Very well done!