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I have pulled my stories from the archives and converted them into PDFs so that people can save them for their own personal use. If you would like a copy of any of my stories, you can go here: softobsidian74.blogspot.com/

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Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen by Salon_Kitty Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: After a night culminating in the Headmaster's murder, a distraught Harry is comforted by a dreamy Luna Lovegood. Is this the beginning of a strange and beautiful psycho-sexual obsessive friendship? We can only hope.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Alecto Carrow, Amycus Carrow, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Neville Longbottom, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Darkfic, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, D/S, Drug Usage, Fisting, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Non-Con, Rape, Rimming, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Voyeurism, Watersports
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 254016 Read Count: 37709
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2010 Updated: 03/15/2011
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Date: 03/30/2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Mad Professor

One of my favorite scenes in this story. Poor Remus, having to witness that and then initiate an awkward conversation. His entire impression of Harry has been splintered. :::evil grin:::  Loved having the gang all rejoin him and deliver him from the hell that is the Dursley residence. lol.

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Date: 02/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lunar Teacake

I love how you pick this up right from the infamous Tower scene. Harry's emotions are so raw and leap off the page. I can feel the UST between him and Luna like WHOA! So hot! And to think she's being used like that. I love angry!Harry. But you know I love this story, so glad to see you posting it here!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Girl From North Country

I love this story! You have Luna and Harry down. And yes, Draco and his friends are bastards. I'm glad she was finally able to tell the truth to someone. Their chemistry is off the chain! Yowza!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Feelin' Alright

LOL! Harry is so ornery. I love how he talks to Hermione in this chapter. And wow@Luna. She's got it bad! But Harry is just as fixated. It's so intoxicating, their chemistry. I can't believe she came to him like that. I'm kinda sad he wants to keep her a secret, but I understand, for now! 

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Sticks and Stones

One of my favorite chapters! I really wanted to kill Goyle, and I was so glad Harry busted it up. Kickass! And then his interaction with Luna afterwards was so gripping! I can totally see her reacting the way she did, but for him to react that way. Just wow. Intense!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bird On A Wire

I love how you're weaving canon in with your own story. The whole Ginny/Harry break up/estrangement situation really wasn't explored deeply enough in the books, IMO, and it ended up short changing Ginny. You do her justice here while still focusing on Harry and this strange new development with Luna plus all the other stuff he has to worry about. Excellent writing!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Letter

I love that you have Harry discovering porn on the computer. LOL! It's so plausible yet so strange because we never think about it in canon, but he does live with Muggles! And wow, his wanking sessions are HOT. Luna sure is a lucky girl. I love the way you're depicting her relationship with her father as well. You're breathing new life into characters that are for the most part pushed to the side in the books. Bravo for that. I totally feel Luna's anticipation. I'd be anxious for that letter to arrive too!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 7: She Came In Through The Bathroom Window

Harry is one bold sonabitch! I love that. It's so true to his character, and it rings true the their strong attraction that he would try such a thing. I loved how realistically you depicted the nervous energy surrounding what they are doing. I was scared for them! And I love how excited and genuine Luna is. God their dirty talk is so HOT! Looking forward to their next escapade as well!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Foxy Prince of Roll

Their exploits and experimentation really takes me back. Makes me wish I was a teenager again. There's this wide eyed innocence in everything they're doing, no matter how kinky. I love how sweet Harry is before and after, and how rough he gets in the midst of it. He's so dreamy here! I also love how much Luna trusts him. It allows them to go a little further each time. It's the perfect set up for a wonderful D/s relationship. Lucky ducks!

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Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Blue Medley, Pt 1.

Oh shit! Dudley is a major wrench. We know the fun couldn't last forever. This is one of the hottest chapters of the story so far, BTW. Harry is really coming into his own as a natural Dom. I love how demanding he gets. It made me sad that he couldn't give Luna a straight answer about Ginny, but I understand this is a difficult time and its kinda complicated.  He's so sweet thinking of refraining from oral because of what Luna's been through. Sigh. Love it!

Author's Response: ((((you)))) You nutter, you.  Thanks.  You always give such great concrit.

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Date: 03/12/2010 Title: Chapter 10: Blue Medley, Pt. 2: I'll Drown In My Tears

This chapter is so touching and hard hitting on so many levels. First you have the unexpected attitude change and support of Dudley. I loved that, and I loved that Harry couldn't quite believe it either. I loved that Dudley and his friends see how beautiful Luna is :) I always love how dominant Harry becomes during sex but how much after care he offers. He's like the perfect Dom. The one line that really won my heart was "Do you want me to own you". Ahhhh! She's so damned lucky! LOL. Luna's story about her father and her rape is so heartbreaking. I'm so glad she found someone who can truly care for her. One of the best chapters so far in this awesome story!

Author's Response: You're so awesome for reviewing!  I do love Harry getting his dom on when he's 'in the mood'.  He's a sexy beast.  But yes, the care he shows her is important for me to highlight in this particular story.  I can't see how a Master can be a true Master without having that tender, responsible side.  It's a lesson Harry is still learning.

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Date: 03/17/2010 Title: Chapter 11: Space Captain

One of the hottest spanking scenes, ever, imo, because of how and wy it starts. It cathartic for Harry. Their chemistry is off the charts. I really got a kick of Dudley trying to learn and understand the cousin he never paid attention to. I'm sure that would have been weird for both of them. And I cracked up at the aerosol scene. Harry's conversation with Luna brings out so many emotions. I'm so glad he told her that's she's fine and not to blame because of what happened to her, but it made me sad that he couldn't really claim her as his because of Ginny. Great chapter!

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Date: 03/30/2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ruby-Lipped Essence of Devon

This chapter is so disturbing yet so HOT...It also shows just how much of a fire Luna has lit within Harry. His passion for her, his need is so...damn. She's a lucky girl. Or perhaps not. LOL. You managed to write a potentially horrific incident in a way that shows just how strong their bond is, and how much Luna really wants to please him. I'm glad Harry now understands his power and how careful and conscious he must be when wielding it. 

 

Oh, and poor Ginny. LOL! 

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Date: 03/30/2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Purveyor of the Sphincter Phone

Ah, here's the awkward Lupin/Harry convo. You've managed to make Lupin endearing again. sometimes he irks me.

 

And Ron catching Luna and Harry? Priceless. I can so see him thinking all of this is a bit too freaky and being disturbed. And, I love him stepping up as a protective big brother too. Harry really did need an intervention at that point. Things are gonna get tense here, I can see.