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Asking For Her Hand by tqpannie Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Past Featured StoryRon goes to visit Mr. Granger to ask permission to marry Hermione.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2029 Read Count: 3233
[Report This] Published: 03/04/2008 Updated: 03/04/2008
Reviewer: Neptune Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/20/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this is one of the best short stories I've read in The Quidditch Pitch, and that's saying something. Sticks to the stroy, not too long but no Drabble, and a heartwarming plot overall- well done!

After the Flaw by KanedaX Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWizards fall in love. Wizards fall out of love. Some enter the world while others leave. Friendships are formed, minds are changed, and some discover that their family is larger than they ever imagined.

A lot can happen in nineteen years...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Aberforth Dumbledore, Albus Severus Potter, Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Cho Chang, Dean Thomas, Dennis Creevey, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Ernie Macmillan, Fenrir Greyback, Filius Flitwick, Firenze, Fleur Delacour, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Hannah Abbott, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Hestia Jones, Horace Slughorn, Hugo Weasley, James (younger) Potter, Justin Finch-Fletchley, Katie Bell, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Lily Potter, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Nymphadora Tonks, OFC, Padma Patil, Parvati Patil, Penelope Clearwater, Percy Weasley, Petunia Dursley, Pomona Sprout, Professor Sinistra, Professor Vector, Remus Lupin, Rita Skeeter, Ron Weasley, Rose Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Scorpius Malfoy, Seamus Finnigan, Sibyll Trelawney, Susan Bones, Various, Vernon Dursley, Viktor Krum, Xenophilius Lovegood
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 237700 Read Count: 87843
[Report This] Published: 04/20/2008 Updated: 11/26/2011
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 04/26/2013 Title: Chapter 42: Nineteen Years Later, Part V: Granger Stubborn

Oh, poor Victoire! And after that whole crisis with the Patronus class! How could you?!
But otherwise, I cannot congratulate you enough for a superb story. The scale alone is mind-boggling. I love the way you flit through different storylines and bring it all to a fitting conclusion! Well done! I shall await any sequel eagerly!
(But really, what does happen to Victoire???)

All That We See Or Seem by IamShadow Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Harry collapses after seeing his children off on the Hogwarts Express. When he awakes, things aren't as they were.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Madam Pomfrey, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10884 Read Count: 8468
[Report This] Published: 05/06/2008 Updated: 05/17/2008
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 03/06/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: In Parting From You Now

Oh my goodness, what a splendid story. I love the way you weave tragedy with a feel-good atmosphere, and the characterisations are marvellous, particularly for Remus and Ginny! An interesting take on the DH canon, but one I can actually appreciate COULD happen!
One query I have- in this version of events, what happens to Snape? How do we (or Harry) find out his true allegiance? What happens to him during the battle? I'm presuming he survives, but I'd like to know more!
All in all, your writing style is magnificent and this story stands out, I eagerly await any sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you so much; it's so nice to get such a warm comment on this story after such a long time. It's one of my personal favourites that I wrote when I was in Potter fandom, but, like much of my gen fic, I never felt like it got the same amount of appreciation as stories I wrote that were centred around pairings. There wasn't a huge following for genfic back when I wrote this, and the ship lines were pretty heavily drawn, unlike fandoms I've been in since where pairing fic and gen fic are much more fluid and intermingled. To be honest, it's been so long since I wrote this that I don't remember Snape's fate; I'm sure I had an idea at the time, but I've forgotten it. I may have addressed it if someone asked me in the comments on my fic journal - if you go to shadowfiction at livejournal then find All That We See or Seem in the masterlist, you can go to the story chapters and read the comments to find out what answers I gave people at the time about extra world-building stuff.

A Magical Renaissance by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
Summary: Hermione goes through an emotional and magical Renaissance in a race against time to save her life.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270837 Read Count: 131622
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2008 Updated: 12/27/2009
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/04/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Release and Revenge

A bit of a disappointment in the ending- nonetheless, this shows great potential. Well done!

Summary: Herein are twenty little known, random facts about the often misunderstood Lavender Brown as told by the man who watched her from a distance, loving her all the while.  (Lavender/Seamus)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Lavender Brown, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: General, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort Vanishes, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1165 Read Count: 2097
[Report This] Published: 10/01/2008 Updated: 10/01/2008
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am, quite frankly, speechless. I've even got a few tears in my eyes. I never thought of this character combination, but everything fits perfectly. Congratulations on a brilliant story!

Author's Response: That's quite a review.  Thank you so much.  This was a pleasure to write.  I have deep affection for Lavender Brown and she often is given the short end of the proverbial stick in fanfiction. I like to see her through someone other than Harry's eyes occasionally.

Scandalous by luvscharlie Rated: MT - Mature Themes [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Professor Dumbledore only hoped this incident would not have the same repercussions as the scandalous Hogwarts Orgy of 1969.
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, Horace Slughorn
Genres: Comedy, Crack-Fic, Drabble, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het, Love/Hate, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 544 Read Count: 681
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2008 Updated: 11/02/2008
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha ha! I like this! Short, sweet and a hilarious ending!

I Wanna Know by deenas Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: In the last year, Harry's had to discover what it means to have the power of love on his side.

Lyrics are taken from Foreigner's song "I Wanna Know What Love Is." I heard the song on the radio and it spawned this huge plot bunny that I am pleased to present to you. There are also some quotes taken from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, UK version, pages 578, 579 and 580. Also, props go out to Forrest Gump, because you can never have too much Forrest Gump now can you?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Dennis Creevey, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Post-War, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Minor Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7854 Read Count: 1090
[Report This] Published: 02/18/2009 Updated: 02/18/2009
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 08/10/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this. That's all I can say, really!