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A Badge by tqpannie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: What was Hermione going to say when Ron got his prefects badge
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1004 Read Count: 2505
[Report This] Published: 10/25/2005 Updated: 10/25/2005
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 10/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Stylish and well-written with a humorous twist at the very end. Well done indeed!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  I always try to put something funny in my stories.  It's just the way my brain works.

Love From Hermione by Demosthenes Rated: GP - General Public [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIn their sixth year, Harry discovers that Hermione's been writing him secret letters since they first met. What does he discover about her, and himself, that's got him so ill at ease? And what will Hermione do when she finds out he's been going through her extremely personal, extremely private, things?
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11009 Read Count: 593
[Report This] Published: 01/31/2006 Updated: 01/31/2006
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 08/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Love From Hermione

One of your favorites, Demosthenes...and certainly one of mine. Exceptional for a first fic, and simply incredibly well-written! You really light up the relationship between Harry and Hermione here, in a way that is both funny and charming. The ending sentence, in particularly, was just fantastic. I love it!

Bibliophile by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Hermione really likes books.
Categories: The Broomshed > Self Pleasure
Characters: Hermione Granger
Genres: Ficlet, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Masturbation
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-05) The "I Touch Myself" Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-05) The "I Touch Myself" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 858 Read Count: 6190
[Report This] Published: 05/28/2006 Updated: 05/28/2006
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bibliophile

Ridiculous, but a great fun to read!



Author's Response: *grins* Thanks!

Together Forever by thesteppyone Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA messed up potion, some unwanted side effects and a 'situation' they really could do without. Hermione/Ron centric and Lavender of course! Set during HBP and therefore may contain spoilers.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst
Series: The 'Togther Forever?' Universe
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75252 Read Count: 33931
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2007 Updated: 05/29/2008
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/19/2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This story has the honour of being my first ever QUIDDITCH PITCH fanfiction read, and I have only just finished it, at last. The last chapter was, admittedly, slightly confusing, but when contemplated in reference to the rest of the story, it provides a fitting end to a story that is overall worthy of J.K Rowling.

While staying perfectly close to the original storyline, 'Together Forever' has everything- an engaging beginning, laughter, anxiety, romance, peril, comedy, emotion, suspense, and a heartbreaking ending when they lose their memories. Not too long to be boring, yet just long enough to be interesting.

I loved this plot- the whole 'connection' idea really captures your Harry Potter imagination, and provides a whole new perspective on the classic love story of Hermione & Ron. Truly they belong together, forever!

The whole story is just as complex and masterful as any of the original Harry Potter books, and it will always be on my list of Favourite Reads. Well done indeed, thesteppyone, I absolutely loved this! Good work!

Fate of the Generations by BrandedFaithfully Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIn the summer after sixth year, Harry is faced with many decisions; how to proceed with the horcrux hunt, how to keep his friends safe and what to do about his ever changing feelings towards a certain red-haired girl. What if this 'power the Dark Lord knows not' was in him all the time, but was being repressed? And could Ron's first Order mission bring back the answers that could unlock this power, forcing all of them to relive an ancient story and break the curse that became the fate of the generations.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 164021 Read Count: 39781
[Report This] Published: 03/28/2007 Updated: 12/03/2008
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/07/2008 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Pieces of the Puzzle

Ooh what an ending! Another awesome chapter written. I just can't wait for the climax!

Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 10/15/2008 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Acceptance

It took me two months to finish 'Fate of the Generations' to this point, and another month to form an opinion on the story. I have read a great amount of fan-fiction in my time, not just from Harry Potter, and each time, I leave a summary of my personal view. Indeed, at school, my friends call me 'the Scyther' due to my highly critical reviews of books and films we see or read as a class. However, this is not an autobiography; on the story itself, I have little to say, save this; in this reader's opinion, you would be hard pressed to find a story in The Quidditch Pitch to match this masterpiece.

In length, structure, development and involvement of characters, supense, and pure captivating atmosphere, this particular story makes for one of the finest fan-fiction reads I have ever read. J.K Rowling would be proud. I eagerly await the promised two chapters and epilogue. Congratulations!



Author's Response: Dear Neptune, After reading your first sentence, I braced myself for a scathing review but then immediately released a relieved breath.  I'm so thrilled that you have enjoyed this story and appreciate your glowing review!  It took a long time to write and I must admit I love hearing when a reader has really immersed themselves in it.  I hope that you will enjoy the ending - crossing my fingers!  I hope to see your name reviewing other works of mine in the future.  By the way, this was a great birthday present!  Thanks again.

Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 12/08/2008 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - A Curse is a Curse, Of Course, Of Course

Well, what can I say? 'Fate of the Generations' rivals the actual original books in...well, everything! This is one heck of a story, BrandedFaithfully, and I love it! The ending practically had me in tears.

In fact, I would recommend you publish this as a homage to J.K Rowling. I am very impressed. Well done on bringing it to such a climatic, emotional, stylish and brilliant end!

Every QuidditchPitch reader worth their salt should have 'Fate of the Gernerations' marked as Favourites. I shake you by the hand, BrandedFaithfully- well done!



Author's Response: Neptune, I'm humbled and honored at your lovely words.  You've truly given me something to smile about tonight.  I'm really exciting about some other stuff I have in the works and getting a review like yours just puts fuel to the fire.  Thank you for the bottom of my heart!!!  Hugs!

Perception Isn't Everything by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: The Ministry is changing its image.  What’s a young, proper, career-minded and love-starved girl to do when she’s no longer the Ministry’s ‘Poster Child?’  And, who’s giving her a little push in the right direction?  Eighteen months after the fall of our favorite villain.  Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112394 Read Count: 26974
[Report This] Published: 06/02/2007 Updated: 09/14/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 12/11/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Violets Are Blue

So far, so good. Another impressive story, BrandedFaithfully. I particularly like the style of writing here, and in terms of plot the excrutiating build-up to Ron and Hermione's romantic boom in Chapter 6, and Ginny and Harry's antics just make me laugh. Still have to finish, but so far, a pleasing and humorous read! Well done.

Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 12/22/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - To Bonk Or Not To Bonk...That is the Question

I was blown away by this story. You just keep surprising me, BrandedFaithfully! I love this story- romantic, stylish, engaging, and of course with plenty of erotica to (ahem) spice it up a little. I especially emjoyed Chapters 8 and 9, with the whole Ginny-Harry story. Another impressive story, congrats!



Author's Response: Dear Neptune, I have to apologize as I just  noticed that I had completely missed your review back in December!  I know at the time I was busy trying to get my Christmas fic out so I must have missed this.  So, a big belated THANK YOU for such incredible comments.  I'll try to tuck them away and recall them come this December!

A Perfect Day for Flying by pettybureaucrat Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Harry's life changes in the Quidditch locker room. Chapter 28.5 of GoF. Things would have been a lot different had JKR written this.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Katie Bell
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash, Het, Masturbation, Strong Sexual Content, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8066 Read Count: 9528
[Report This] Published: 06/08/2007 Updated: 06/08/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/03/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this. A good clear plotline, long enough to be enjoyable but not short enough to be boring, and an interesting plot twist. Served with a generous helping of erotica as well. Good work!

Author's Response: thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

A Little Brave by Tarie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Near the end of his seventh year at Hogwarts, Harry left the wizarding world without a trace. Years later, he and Hermione are unexpectedly reunited... will they be able to rekindle what they once had? (Harry/Hermione)

Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7035 Read Count: 2768
[Report This] Published: 06/18/2007 Updated: 06/18/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 12/03/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely brilliant! That's all I can say!

Author's Response: Many thanks!

Stronger Than Me by risiepookie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Past Featured Story“Please,” he says huskily, “I want you so bad,” and he kisses her again. A sob catches in my throat as the angry tears begin their rise again. He’s never said those words to me and I can’t help but feel she has stolen words she has no right to.

She watches and she tries to understand why she wasn't enough for Ron.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2732 Read Count: 5585
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2007 Updated: 08/13/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/10/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Stronger Than Me

Very clever! I was really thinking this was about Ron/Lavender and Hermione looking on, but the twist at the end really surprises you. Very well-written! Good work!



Author's Response: Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and your lovely compliments!  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it and it had you fooled until the end! *pound cake for you*

Quiet Comes the Dawn by admjkirkmcgill Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: The final book ends abruptly with many questions that must be answered before the brave new world created in the Epilogue can truly come to be. This is the story of our heroes 7th year as the dark night ends and the dawn of a new era approaches . . .
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Major Fluff, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2956 Read Count: 2933
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2007 Updated: 08/23/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 11/06/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Quiet Comes the Dawn

If there was an O.W.L in 'Harry Potter' Creative Writing, this would grade an 'O', any time.

Plush and Inviting by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: This is an extended version of Chapter 17 of “Fate of the Generations.”  It would make more sense if you read the entire story first.  However, if you want to read this alone - it takes place in June after their 7th year.  Ron and Hermione have recently become an “official” couple and Hermione is convincing Ron that she was not cheating on him when he witnessed her in a conversation with Draco Malfoy earlier in the day.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9557 Read Count: 2237
[Report This] Published: 10/08/2007 Updated: 10/08/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An excellent piece of erotica, well done!

Master of the Game by TheWarSausage Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Old were his hands and gnarled, yet tough like tree roots, twisting in dark and secret places. Still nimble, his fingers picked up a knight, lingering over its finely crafted features of witchwood and ebony.

“Do you know why they call it the Game of Kings?”

His face, a black silhouette before the pale winter light, falling through high, dusty windows. Silence pooled in the shadows like dark water undisturbed for centuries. Every whisper a sacrilege in this place of watching ghosts.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Dungeon, The Broomshed > Dark Side, The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Alastor Moody, Amelia Bones, Arthur Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Igor Karkaroff, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lucius Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, OFC, OMC, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Rufus Scrimgeour, Seamus Finnigan, Severus Snape
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Darkfic, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: Post-War, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Character Death, Drug Usage, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Love/Hate, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19234 Read Count: 3465
[Report This] Published: 10/27/2007 Updated: 11/06/2007
Reviewer: Neptune Signed
Date: 10/06/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Hour of the Wolf

I love this. Just the right mixture of action, humour and (implied) romance. You manage to capture the central characters perfectly- the frustration and bitterness of Ron, in particular, really comes across. I eagerly await a further addition- maybe some of Harry? A fantastic story, thank you!