awesomely written. if u could imagine how they might've ended up together this is as close as it gets. well done.

omg...u've got me drooling here!! lol. this is excellently done. i especially love the fact that hermione is trying to get harry to delve into his own psyche, and i think that he really wouldnt like what he finds there. their bond over the loneliness they endured as children was also very touching and of course i love the sex without penetration scenes between them. i've always loved harry/hermione stories and i always believed they would be a great couple. please keep em' coming!!!

PLEASE.....KEEP GOING!!! someone ought to be punished for making me wait this long for more chapters....lol

Author's Response:

Ty, I am working on the chapter of another fic at the moment, but I plan on returning to Snorcacks and finishing it once I'm done.  Sorry that I keep forgetting to post here for this when I've already got another ten chapters written for it, but I promise that the updates will come much more frequently in the next few weeks.  I've pretty much given up on going over it and re-editing it to refine the clunky parts.  It is what it is, at this point, and I can only improve the writing in the future chapters I write, as I've got too many other things going on at the moment.

Thanks so much for your continued support of this story.

i agree...that posting things no one would possibly read is like posting to a void...but that's the challenge isn't it?? i always felt that when a writer writes, they're doing it for the joy of the art itself...not so much for approval. but then again, its the reader's approval that deems whether we want to continue writing. i guess that's why i'm a bit wary to post my own story. but its reading stories like urs...daring stories; stories that push the envelope of what we could only imagine in our dizziest daydreams...that makes me want to throw caution to the wind and write for all the world to see...or just for my eyes only. keep up the brilliant work.

Author's Response:

Oh, I'm going to finish the story for my own satisfaction and enjoyment, no doubt about that.  But as compared to the other place I was posting, the lack of response here translated to disinterest to me.  I could be wrong.  However, if you're really enjoying a story, it takes no effort to let an author know that.  I do it all the time.  Readers' comments and thoughts can really add a lot to an author's process as they continue the fic.  I added a lot of things based on revelations and concrit that was directed to me.

The stuff I'm posting now was written a while back, and one of the reasons I decided to post here was so it would give me the opportunity to rewrite awkward bits and finesse the prose.  That takes some time, too.  The next three chapters, I feel, could really use some work.

Thanks for your reply.  What do you think of the new developments?

 two words......KEEP WRITING!!!! ok, make it  three...PLEASE keep writing. i can go for four...PRETTY PLEASE keep writing....!!!!

Author's Response:

XD Well, thank you for the avid support. I will be continuing the series, but it just takes a while. I'm a singer and designer by nature, not a writer, so writing can be a little laborious for me if I don't take it in stride.

Again, though, I WILL be continuing this, so fret not. ^-^

awwwww...this is sweet.

sweeet!!! ha!! poor lily....lol. excellently done...and i wouldnt mind saying...i would not mind in the slightest if u continued this story. ta!!

very hot..please continue....!