Penname: Grownupron [Contact] Real name: Joe Goodwin
Member Since: 04/16/2006
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I Believed in Father Christmas by mrmoon Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Season of the Wolf.  Lavender takes Seamus home for Christmas to meet her family.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Alecto Carrow, Cho Chang, Dean Thomas, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Luna Lovegood, OFC, OMC, Parvati Patil, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Minor Fluff, Strong Language
Series: Sisters of the Moon, Professor Finnigan
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52419 Read Count: 4295
[Report This] Published: 12/10/2009 Updated: 07/06/2010
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 07/07/2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Let Your Road be Clear

I might be wrong but I'm pretty sure hermione thinks Seamus is an idiot. In fact I'm almost positive that she calls him an idiot more than once is is almost totally dismissive of him throughout all of the books.

Author's Response:

I think you may be confusing some fanfic with cannon. The only time there is a problem between Seamus and the trio is in OTP when Shay believes the Prophet over Harry for a time. Hermione doesn’t talk about Seamus in OTP or any of the books after that. She calls Ron an idiot several times, but Seamus is apparently not on her radar. I see both he and Lavender as maturing quite a lot in their seventh year at Hogwarts. They both were at the battle and fought bravely, as true Gryffindors would.

A Heart Broken by Ginfan Rated: MT - Mature Themes half-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: When Hermione returns from a visit with Ginny and Harry on their island with an all over tan how will Ron react? 
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Love/Hate
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17894 Read Count: 9382
[Report This] Published: 01/27/2010 Updated: 01/27/2010
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 01/27/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

All of your fics seem to be a really convoluted and unbelievable tale contrived to put Harry/Ginny/Hermione together.

Why not start out that way and avoid all the wildly OOC characterizations?

Coming Home by DukeBrymin Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Now that the Final Battle is over, Harry wants to pick up the pieces of the life he left behind, starting with Ginny.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11103 Read Count: 3771
[Report This] Published: 08/16/2010 Updated: 10/30/2010
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 10/30/2010 Title: Chapter 5: We Cordially Invite You

Wow Hermione actually attacked Ron with a spell that causes pain and damage. I hope he's got enough pride to kick her abusive butt to the curb

Author's Response: You might want to re-read that chapter again--you have the wrong female.

Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 10/31/2010 Title: Chapter 5: We Cordially Invite You

Okay yeah my bad, its Molly who needs to get arrested. But really everybody is wildly OOC here so they probably use magic to hurt their kids all the time.

Author's Response: So, if you think my characters are "wildly OOC", what do you say about Uncle Algie, who dropped Neville out of a window just to make him show his magic?  Totally canon.  And Ron has proved many times in the past that he's fickle, and will turn on his friends very easily.  Has he grown up any?  Possibly, but we haven't seen a whole lot of evidence.

Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 10/31/2010 Title: Chapter 5: We Cordially Invite You

Dude, do whatever its your fic but its canon that of the Trio Ron is the least prone to violence. Even Hermione has used violence when angry more than Ron and Harry used Unforgivables a good bit.

 The bloke's not perfect but I'm pretty sure Molly never stunned any of her children. In fact she seemed pretty protective of them. Enough so that I doubt she'd hit one of them with the magical equivilent of a taser. I get that in "harry is perfect" stories authors sometimes play up Ron's faults so Harry can be there to clean up the mess but don't claim its canon. Yeah Ron snogged Lav Lav and he let the locket Horcrux get to him but he didn't get Sirius killed nor did he get them captured by snatchers. All three of them are flawed and imperfect and thats why they are a trio.



Author's Response: I guess we'll have to agree to disagree.  Thanks for your comments.  I hope you continue to enjoy vituperatively commenting upon my story.

The Division Bell by mrmoon Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A globe spanning adventure that takes Katie Bell and Adrian Pucey from Hogsmeade to the Salisbury plain, Whales, and beyond. Katie is in a life she never anticipated, and Adrian is her partner. Aberforth Dumbledore has some advice for her, Pansy presents a challenge, and Charlie Weasley has a dragon problem.


Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Aberforth Dumbledore, Adrian Pucey, Anthony Goldstein, Cedric Diggory, Charlie Weasley, Cho Chang, Dolores Umbridge, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Katie Bell, Lavender Brown, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Neville Longbottom, OFC, Oliver Wood, OMC, Padma Patil, Pansy Parkinson, Pomona Sprout, Stan Shunpike, Various
Genres: Action/Adventure, Erotica, Fluff, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Bondage, Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Orgy, Public Sex, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38757 Read Count: 3345
[Report This] Published: 07/22/2011 Updated: 09/19/2011
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 09/26/2011 Title: Chapter 8: Extras

For some reason I didn't see an AU tag so I thought it was canon based. Imagine my surprise.

Author's Response:

I didn’t think it was AU enough for that. The only place I deviate from the book cannon is the epilogue. Many deviate from the epilogue without being particularly AU. If you take J.K.s interviews as cannon then yes I did deviate quite a lot, but again many do. This is the first comment of this kind I've got for this story.

 

Message in a Bottle by mrmoon Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A Hugo Weasley mystery. Someone has died under mysterious circumstances, and Hugo Weasley, private dick, is on the case. Who done it? Well, let me know at what chapter You figured it out.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, Hugo Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Pansy Parkinson, Scorpius Malfoy
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, FemSlash, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18314 Read Count: 2136
[Report This] Published: 08/01/2012 Updated: 08/01/2012
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 08/27/2013 Title: Chapter 6: B.L. H.G. 03/23/98

This could use an AU tag since we know from canon that Draco fought to keep them imprisioned and did not help them escape. Other than that it was interesting.

Concerns by Northumbrian Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Hermione is pregnant, Ron is an idiot...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Parvati Patil, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3397 Read Count: 686
[Report This] Published: 03/16/2013 Updated: 03/16/2013
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 03/21/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Concerns

Ron wasn't an idiot he was right, if she was ill enough to be hospitalized then his concern was completely warranted. Yet somehow we are supposed to think he's the idiot and Hermione's the all knowing one? I don't buy it.

Author's Response: Hermione was dehydrated, that's all, she'll be up and about very soon. Ron overreacted. I'm uncertain as to where you think I made the claim that Hermione is all-knowing. There's nothing for you to buy. -N-