Penname: Grownupron [Contact] Real name: Joe Goodwin
Member Since: 04/16/2006
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Harry Potter and The Bound Prince (BP1) by Slashpervert Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary: In Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince there is a pivotal moment where things could have gone very differently. That is the bathroom scene where Harry nearly kills Draco by accident. Draco is upset that Harry has caught him crying and throws a hex. It escalates and ends in blood. Our story begins with the simple premise of "what if" something changed in the bathroom scene so that Harry and Draco talked instead of throwing hexes. It also takes the assumption of unvoiced attraction between the two. Draco takes a chance and kisses Harry. Once sparked, their mutual desire and exploration becomes the driving force in the alternative ending to that of Half-Blood Prince. Draco's "mission" from Voldemort turns out to be more complex than that presented in canon and their solution even more difficult.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Contains Spoiler for HBP, D/S, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Voyeurism
Series: The Bound Prince
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133670 Read Count: 78804
[Report This] Published: 10/07/2007 Updated: 10/25/2007
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 08/14/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: House Business

This part of the fic doesn't make any sense. everyone is acting like Ron's response is unreasonable. But Malfoy has been absolutely evil to them for years and just forgetting about it in a few days IS unreasonable. Not to mention as soon as they find out Malfoy was the one who poisoned Ron its going to go pear shapped anyway.

The Wireless by Amythis Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 75]
[Report This] Published: 10/13/2007 Updated: 11/10/2008
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 11/11/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One: Abandon

I think you have gotten several unfair reviews from people because they do not like the ship you have chosen.

That said, I think you could have avoided their input by marking it as an AU fic which it clearly is given its deviation from JKR's intent. it was an intertaining read but Harry, Ron and Hermione did sem to be wildly out of character.

 Once I decided to read it as a non-HP orignal work I found it highly entertaining.

Live...or Die Trying by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 399]
Summary: Hermione becomes bitter and lost after Ron and Harry leave her.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134755 Read Count: 70965
[Report This] Published: 02/09/2008 Updated: 05/29/2011
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 04/26/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 "The Bane of Hermione's Existence"

I'm a big R/Hr shipper but if I was Harry I'd tell Ron to stay way the hell away from Hermione. I mean its a best mates responsibility to warn him off nutbag women.

 Not to mention by now she's probably got something bleach won't get rid of.



Author's Response:

Hello Grownupron,

I could do that but then there would be nothing to write about, eh? I'll keep them on the crazy train for now.

~missgranger2

Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 11/08/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: "Busy Fingers and Idle Resolutions"

I can't figure out why anybody would care what happens to Hermione at this point. She's horrible, hopefully Ron will realize that Crazy Girl is best avoided until she self destructs.

 Don't let her drag you down with her dude.



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely Grownupron!

Bwahahahahahahaha! *sighs* Wooooo-hooooo! *wipes eyes* I just loved your review. Thanks for that. "Don't let her drag you down with her dude" was priceless. *giggles* You positively made my day, dear! *hugs*

XXX,

missgranger2 

Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 09/04/2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 "I'll Show You Mine, If You Show Me Yours"

I'm beginning to think Hermione is too mentally unbalanced to work in Law Enforcement, its absolutely Xanax time.

Author's Response:

Hello Dear Grownupron!

  Bwahahahahahahahahaha! Your comments made me laugh so hard. Thank you for that as I've needed a good laugh lately!!!

Much love!

Tammy (>:

Sisters of the Moon by mrmoon Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

“Women have come together under the full moon since magic first arose, to learn and to teach, to celebrate and to morn, to laugh and to cry, and to save a wayward sister from time to time,” Luna intoned as she raised her wand.

Pansy tried to seduce the wrong man, and now she pays the price. But what is the cost, and what is the reward.

Post DH. The story of a group of women who come together to help one, and end up finding a bond undreamt of.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Cho Chang, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Voldemort
Genres: Drama
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Violence
Series: Sisters of the Moon, Professor Finnigan
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9584 Read Count: 2367
[Report This] Published: 03/01/2008 Updated: 05/07/2008
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 08/27/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Redemption

I'm not sure I buy the ending. Pansy tried to drug and rape Ron and for that she gets rewarded with membership into an elite group that includes his sister and his wife/girlfriend?

The Best Ones Bite by Ozma_katiebell Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Charlie can't understand why Miss Brown seems so immune to his charms.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Charlie Weasley, Lavender Brown
Genres: Ficlet, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 871 Read Count: 515
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2008 Updated: 04/07/2008
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 04/07/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

Totally made of win.

After the Flaw by KanedaX Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWizards fall in love. Wizards fall out of love. Some enter the world while others leave. Friendships are formed, minds are changed, and some discover that their family is larger than they ever imagined.

A lot can happen in nineteen years...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Aberforth Dumbledore, Albus Severus Potter, Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Cho Chang, Dean Thomas, Dennis Creevey, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Ernie Macmillan, Fenrir Greyback, Filius Flitwick, Firenze, Fleur Delacour, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Hannah Abbott, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Hestia Jones, Horace Slughorn, Hugo Weasley, James (younger) Potter, Justin Finch-Fletchley, Katie Bell, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Lily Potter, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Nymphadora Tonks, OFC, Padma Patil, Parvati Patil, Penelope Clearwater, Percy Weasley, Petunia Dursley, Pomona Sprout, Professor Sinistra, Professor Vector, Remus Lupin, Rita Skeeter, Ron Weasley, Rose Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Scorpius Malfoy, Seamus Finnigan, Sibyll Trelawney, Susan Bones, Various, Vernon Dursley, Viktor Krum, Xenophilius Lovegood
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 237700 Read Count: 86513
[Report This] Published: 04/20/2008 Updated: 11/26/2011
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 12/11/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw

I've really liked this story for a while but I have to admit Hermione basically blackmailing Ron to change how he treated Harry and Ginny left a really bad taste in my mouth.

 

he should have ditched her for good after that.

Really good storyline though.

Primal by mrmoon Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: In the aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts love blossoms, in a BIG way. Hagrid/Maxime, Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Bill/Fleur Luna/Dean, Neville/Mandy, George/Cho/Angelina
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings, The Broomshed > More Than Two
Characters: Angelina Johnson, Bill Weasley, Cho Chang, Dean Thomas, Fleur Delacour, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Mandy Brocklehurst, Neville Longbottom, Olympe Maxime, Ron Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: Sisters of the Moon
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6501 Read Count: 3660
[Report This] Published: 05/10/2008 Updated: 05/10/2008
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 08/27/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Primal

Okay this was funny.

A Magical Renaissance by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
Summary: Hermione goes through an emotional and magical Renaissance in a race against time to save her life.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270837 Read Count: 129883
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2008 Updated: 12/27/2009
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 09/04/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Confections of a Broken Heart

Wow Hermione is such an idiot....

Author's Response: Why do you say that?

Summary: She was accused of betraying their friendship, their side, so she left. Almost three years have passed and now she is asked to forgive and forget. Hermione did not know what to do or how to feel .... Non-DH complaint.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Draco Malfoy, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 216082 Read Count: 38097
[Report This] Published: 06/30/2008 Updated: 10/08/2012
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 11/09/2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That was an all out Ron bashing. Hermione acted like a nut job with regards to a great many of her choices and then gets angry when people wonder why she's like she's a mental patient.

I'm starting to suspect Ron was right about ehr years ago.



Author's Response:

It was the first time Hermione and Ron saw each other after a long time and Hermione was under stress because of the article. It was never my intention to write an all out Ron bashing. I thought this first meeting between them couldn't go any other way. Ron will be back, he needs to clear the air with Hermione and this time she'll have to listen and yes, I agree with you Hermione needs someone to tell her a few hard truths.  Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment.

 

Elena

First Years and Mirror Image by rhrshipper23 Rated: GP - General Public [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHermione and Ron discuss Rose's first day at Hogwarts.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Xenophilius Lovegood
Genres: Drabble, Fluff
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 203 Read Count: 1878
[Report This] Published: 09/10/2008 Updated: 09/12/2008
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 09/13/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

 

Did Hermione forget Draco almost killed Ron and Katie while trying to murder Dumbledore? He's just like Lucious. 

One Big Horny Weasley Family by theelderwyrm Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Ron and Hermione are contentedly married young couple with a fairly conventional sex life until a few too many drinks at George and Alicia's New Year's Eve loosen their tongues. Then they find out they are just part of one big horny Weasley Family.
Categories: The Broomshed > More Than Two, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Alicia Spinnet, Angelina Johnson, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Fleur Delacour, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Katie Bell, Lavender Brown, Lee Jordan, Parvati Patil, Penelope Clearwater, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, FemSlash, Masturbation, Orgy, Rimming, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 126033 Read Count: 101277
[Report This] Published: 11/13/2008 Updated: 07/07/2014
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 09/30/2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Breakfast of Champions

Even in  crackfic theres no way this ends well.

Author's Response: Oh, I don't know about that.  I will admit that in my "Alt Chapter" file I have some fairly ugly and abrupt endings, but let's save the alternate endings until after the final cut.  Thanks for reading.

Watching Love by mugglemama Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: 4 times Harry watched Ron and Hermione being intimate without their knowledge, and the 1 time they definitely knew.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28083 Read Count: 18902
[Report This] Published: 06/21/2009 Updated: 10/12/2009
Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time - May 3, 1998

Hmmmm thats a pretty creepy Harry.

Author's Response: Creepy? Maybe.  Confused and lonely, more likely.  He's never known love like what they have and it kind of overwhelms him.  I think he craves the kind of connection they have - both physical and emotional.   Plus Ron is really hot.  hee hee

Reviewer: Grownupron Signed
Date: 08/24/2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Fourth Time - July 23, 2000

One suggestion, if Harry is going to be "involved" in the last chapter you'll want to add either Trio or Threesome to your warnings. Just for those you like R/Hr but not with Harry.

 Just out of courtesy.



Author's Response: Any warnings will be updated accordingly once the chapter is written and it is determined that something has happened to change the nature of the fic.  This is a Ron/Hermione story and WILL not be a 'threesome' in the sense of 3 people engaged in sex together.  Harry knows he can't share in what they have and what they do.  That doesn't mean he will remain as passive as he has been.