Penname: Aethonan [Contact] Real name: Shoshana
Member Since: 05/21/2008
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Hopelessly addicted fan-fic fan, and not trying too hard to quit.
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I Like the Way You Move by rospberry Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Voldemort is gone and Harry is hiding from the world, relying on Polyjuice and the trust of his friends to keep his relationship with Draco Malfoy secret. Draco's just about had enough. (Harry/Draco SLASH) Oneshot. Not HPB compliant.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Minor Fluff, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5202 Read Count: 744
[Report This] Published: 10/01/2007 Updated: 10/01/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/19/2009 Title: Chapter 1: I Like the Way You Move

I could kiss you right now!  That was brilliant!  I love how all the characters are so very much themselves, and Ron and Hermione at the end made me want to cheer.  The way Draco went about dealing with things, the way Harry didn't want to deal with things, was also so very them, and had me tense in my seat waiting to see what would happen.  The dialogue was witty and appropriate to each character, and the whole story was fun, concise, and WONDERFULLY written. Thank you so much for a great fic!!!

Author's Response: You are such a star! I loved writing this fic 'cause the whole idea scene-by-scene was in my head before I wrote it. It was one of those that had to be written. Thank you!!!

Dreams of Deliverance by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What if events in Deathly Hallows had happened slightly differently: if Harry hadn't shown uncharacteristic caution, if he'd raced headlong into danger as usual, if he hadn't just watched as events played out? A few years have passed and he's teaching at Hogwarts, but the nightmares won't go away. Spoilers for DH. (Snape/Harry slash)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2320 Read Count: 665
[Report This] Published: 10/16/2007 Updated: 10/16/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dreams of Deliverance

What an interesting premise, and so beautifully and passionately executed.  Wonderfully written, and totally captivating!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely comments!

Pucker Up by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter losing a bet Harry has a huge favour to ask of Malfoy. It would make things so much easier if the Slytherin would just say no. Features *very* slight D/s. Oneshot. (Harry/Draco SLASH)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Genres: Comedy, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5830 Read Count: 1858
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2007 Updated: 10/20/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Pucker Up

Oh, funfunfunfunfun!!!  That was so alive with tension, and I squeaked when Snape came in, laughed when Draco said his line about 'compensation', and just positively delighted in the whole bloody thing!  That was awesome, thank you so much!

Author's Response: :) LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank YOU for taking the time to comment!

Vengeance is Mine by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Some things are simply unforgiveable.
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Petunia Dursley, Ron Weasley, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1692 Read Count: 1460
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 10/30/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 08/02/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vengeance is Mine

Stark and painful, just as you hoped, I think.  The question I'm left with, though, is, 'now what?'  Has this satisfied... anything?  Did the Dursleys suffer enough?  I would say no on both counts.

 Vengeance is not enough.

Love Lies Bleeding by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: During her sixth year at Hogwarts, Ginny Weasley discovers a spell that allows her to turn a treasured birthday gift into a window on Harry Potter's soul.  What she sees is not what she expected...
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Bloodplay, Character Death, EWE, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, RST, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Suicide, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9559 Read Count: 5028
[Report This] Published: 11/17/2007 Updated: 11/17/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 10/19/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

whoa.  That was incredible and powerful.  I was transfixed, and somehow you managed to settle into Ginny's voice while maintaining your deft descriptions and characterizations.  Yes, it was hot.  But it was also painful, and somehow beautiful in its pain.  I have... no idea... how you did that.  Thank you.  It's yet another reminder that I need to read everything you write.  We're working on it.

Secondhand Robes: The Epilogue by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: In the near future of Secondhand Robes, Draco feels a certain trepidation about his upcoming loss of virginity. How fortunate that Harry is his inspiration and motivation to overcome that fear!
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Frottage, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21699 Read Count: 4842
[Report This] Published: 11/21/2007 Updated: 11/29/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/14/2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Breathtakingly beautiful.  Thank you so much for this story.

Bewitching Changes by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: An H/D Romantic Farce dedicated to Jennavere. Involves : Veela!Draco, Mate!Harry, chocolate, and a stuffed dragon named Grr!
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Dub-Con, Major Fluff, Orgy, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4606 Read Count: 2144
[Report This] Published: 12/02/2007 Updated: 07/27/2014
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 07/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"He needed comfort, and comfort wasn't always pretty."  So there!

A terrific farce, and highly entertaining!  Thank you Samayel!

I Know by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Draco finally pushes Harry too far, touching off an encounter that changes everything between them.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: BDSM, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Crossdressing, D/S, Dub-Con, Love/Hate, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6145 Read Count: 2687
[Report This] Published: 12/03/2007 Updated: 12/03/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/13/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yowza!  Hawt!!  Your writing, as always, steams off the page.  I'm of two minds about Harry's actions, in a real-world perspective, but then in a 'real-world' no one would have legilimency.  It seemed that the real violation Harry made was not of Draco's body, but of his mind and privacy.  However, since Draco doesn't seem to be complaining.... (-:  All's fair and all that.

I do love how you keep an intelligent sense of humor going through it all; it really beings the characters to life and makes 'em dance!  I look forward to reading more of yours...

In the Bleak Midwinter by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Draco Malfoy learns that sometimes, perfection isn't what's really important...
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10553 Read Count: 3054
[Report This] Published: 12/17/2007 Updated: 12/17/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 09/26/2009 Title: Chapter 1: In the Bleak Midwinter

Quietly beautiful, and absolutely superbly written.  I think this is the third time I've reread this story, and I just love the texture of emotion you convey.  Thank you so very much for the tale.

Who knew? by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry, Draco & Hot Chocolate
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: None
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1195 Read Count: 1707
[Report This] Published: 12/18/2007 Updated: 12/18/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/11/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Who knew?

Oh Harry. Yes, Harry.

I never expect much from drabbles, but you certainly can be relied upon to deliver!  Somehow, in a few hundred words, you just made more complex, interesting characters with better story development than most people do in thousands of words.  You absolutely amaze me, and I LOVE your writing!!!

One Green Bauble by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry, Draco and baubles. A Harry/Draco slash one-shot now with added what-happens-after.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, OFC, OMC, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Slash
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3002 Read Count: 1733
[Report This] Published: 12/19/2007 Updated: 05/03/2008
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Green Bauble

You did it again!  I was giggling throughout, and your capturing of the two of them was just perfect!!!  Well done, and thank you so much!

Author's Response: Have you been working your way through all my fics !?! Yay! I'm so flattered that you like them and that you have been enjoying reading. Many, many thanks and hugs.

Under the Table by IamAGhost Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: You'd think, wouldn't you, that if your parents were sitting at a table with you, you'd keep your hands off your significant other's private bits. Obviously, you haven't had dinner at the Weasley's.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Angelina Johnson, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Fleur Delacour, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Katie Bell, Molly Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Crack-Fic, Erotica, PWP
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het, Slash, Strong Sexual Content, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6732 Read Count: 17716
[Report This] Published: 12/20/2007 Updated: 12/20/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 08/18/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Under the Table

Well, maybe it's a little unorthodox, but I LOVED it.  (-:  It says something for your writing skills that such an insane premise actually became believable! (Well... almost... (-; )

Thanks for the diversion!

Baggage by gingerale Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: All about socks...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1089 Read Count: 922
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2007 Updated: 12/28/2007
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 05/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Yes, but if you break my heart I'll fucking kill you."  Perfect!!!

That was just wonderful!

The Heat Series by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Ron has a secret way to beat the summer heat. Once Harry gets it out of him, he faces an unexpected obstacle...Draco Malfoy.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, General, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Dub-Con, Frottage, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Love/Hate, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43565 Read Count: 9592
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2007 Updated: 01/21/2008
Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 06/30/2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Heat Is On!

The conversation between Ron and Harry is a little stilted, but this still looks to be a tense, hot tale!  I'm excited to keep reading...

Reviewer: Aethonan Signed
Date: 06/30/2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Heat Won't Quit

You portray the seductive shame so well, it's eerie.  Your gift for conveying the intensity of a scene is amazing.