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"That" Need by TheTrioMakesMeHot Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 174]
Summary: Sometimes people have needs they can't satisfy alone. Sometimes, "that" need requires help from our friends.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Ladies Room, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash, Het, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Sexual Content, Underage, Voyeurism, Weasleycest
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43934 Read Count: 253729
[Report This] Published: 12/30/2006 Updated: 04/23/2007
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Date: 01/22/2007 Title: Chapter 9: He'd Always Heard That Payback Was Hell

Another highly charged chapter.  really like the flow of the story and how the tension is building up in the story as a whole.  Will be looking forward to the next installment.



Author's Response: Glad to hear you think it's going well!  Please stick with me and continue to let me know what you think.  My readers' opinions are important to me!!!

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Date: 01/30/2007 Title: Chapter 12: I Just, Umm, Really Like It

Gulp...yeah, you still have us on the edge of our seats.

Will be looking forward to Ginny's lesson



Author's Response:

Oh good...so glad to know I'm still holding your interest! 

I really must apologize for the rather long delay in updating, but my computer crashed last weekend, putting me effectively out of the writing business for a bit.  I know how annoyed I get at lengthy delays in updating by other authors, and I'd promised myself when I started this story that I would add to it at least every 3-4 days, so I truly am sorry I've kept you waiting.

The computer repair shop claims I should be back in business later today, so with any luck, I'll have a new chapter up this weekend . . .I just hope none of those files were lost in the crash.

You Say It's Your Birthday by Emma Grant Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry gets very drunk on his 30th birthday, so drunk that he has no idea what happened that night -- except that it somehow involved Draco Malfoy.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3879 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 01/04/2007 Updated: 01/04/2007
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Date: 01/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow-I must say, the way you describe Harry's drunkeness--well, it brings back a lot of memories.  Very accurate, if I do say so myself. Just too bad we don't get hangover potions, eh?

Anyway, enjoyable story, loved how Malfoy played with Harry's mind, and didn't even remember it!  Too funny.  Was kinda of wondering if Malfoy had ever been with a man before, the hesitation he seemed to have at points.  Loved Harry's BJ expertise...especially since you didn't seem inclined to go into details about how he gained that experience.  I liked the lack of backstory here, it really put the focus on their story

The Glass Onion by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe war against Voldemort has just ended, and Lee has been attacked and hexed while minding the joke shop for the Twins. The near loss of his friend makes George face his feelings.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: George Weasley, Lee Jordan
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Frottage, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45552 Read Count: 51983
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2007 Updated: 11/12/2007
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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 38: 38. Virgin

Wow-yes, it was worth the wait, all the good stuff in life is!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Date: 01/21/2007 Title: Chapter 13: 13. Alone

First time reading this, so I will tell you now that I love the story so far.  Each chapter is quite short, but conveys so much. I love the insecurity George is working around.  And his interactions with his family.  I especially loved his "talk" with Fred. I have never seen that done before and you did it very well.

Author's Response:

I am so glad you like it. It is a story that accompanies my story Within You Without You. I'm trying to make it 'stand alone' but some of this would be enhanced if you are familiar with it. Each chapter is short because of the format I'm writing it in, as a challenge of "50 Smutlets" each mini chapter requiring it to be short and smutty.

Thank you for mentioning his communication with Fred. Although I don't think they have literal 'telepathy' I do think there is a subtle mental connection they have like that.

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Date: 01/31/2007 Title: Chapter 15: 15. Shower

Oh so happy to see an update...Poor George, He is way too worried over something most people have probably already figured out!

Author's Response:

I know it. George just desperately doesn't want to be outcast from his brothers. His whole definition of being a man has turned up side down on him.

Thank you! 

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Date: 02/19/2007 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Swinging

Very creative (and Hot).  Thanks for updating one of my favourite stories

Author's Response: Aww thanks! One of your favorites? Really? Cool:D

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Date: 03/07/2007 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Public Place

This isn't terribly important, but this was written on an airplane over the Atlantic after seeing Equus *gloats obnoxiously* - as long as you know we all hate you for it (Just kidding, of course! Did you review it anywhere, like Shari did?)

It may not be a particularly important part, but it is still nice to see him get back to work.  I want to bang my head against the wall with all the secrecy...not that anybody wants to see him get a bj in the middle of the store or anything, but they should be able to be friendly with each other in public.

 

 



Author's Response:

Heh - aww thanks. My comments on Equus can be found on my LiveJournal. 

I know, it's really good to get G&L out in the public. It's been a long time in coming, that's for sure. This format of 'smutlets' requires each one to be an R or NC-17 ratings, which can be difficult to manage when they are out and about in public. But that's my challenge.

Thanks for the comments! 

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Date: 04/09/2007 Title: Chapter 20: 20. Fur

Oh dear, true love never did run smoothly.  I hope Lee can forgive George.  Glad we don't have to wait long to find out what happens next

Author's Response: Not too long at all! :D George will have to make it up to him, I think. Heh.

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Date: 04/14/2007 Title: Chapter 22: 22. Costume

That was just plainly terrific.  Loved how Fred didn't bat an eye when he first walked in.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I like to think there's not a thing George could do that Fred wouldn't support, no matter how different they may be. 

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Date: 05/12/2007 Title: Chapter 24: 24. Naked

I just love the way you blend the hot sexiness of the scene, with the quiet realism of an established relationship. Although I'm not really into public sex, I just love everything about this, from Lee's hesitancy to the couple who waited for them to be finished.  I can picture this with such clarity, I am amazed at how short it actually it.

Can't wait for the next installment!



Author's Response: Oh that's great - thank you. I'm bound by the requirement of 50_smutlets to make of each installment R/NC-17, so it's a challenge to move the story along plot wise, and maintain the proper smut quotient. :D I love that you noticed the 'little things'. Thank you!

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Date: 05/23/2007 Title: Chapter 25: 25. Drugs

Wow, this was another powerful chapter. I really liked how they worked this out together.  Great Job!

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Date: 05/24/2007 Title: Chapter 26: 26. Twins

Wonderful.  The ending totally made me smile.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and for commenting!

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Date: 06/27/2007 Title: Chapter 27: 27. Kitchen

I just loved the level of intimacy expressed throughout this whole portion.  Mostly between George and Lee, but also between the Twins, how close they are is very evident.  Glad to hear updates may be coming along more quicker, this is one of my favourites at the moment.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear from you! I did want this to feel very 'intimate' so I'm glad you said that. The last few had been a bit on the silly/porny side and I wanted to bring it back to the real connection and affection between them. Thank you!

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Date: 08/07/2007 Title: Chapter 30: 30. Restraint

Oh dear, from such a cuddly, lovely interlude in chapter 29, to this...not a turn I enjoyed.

That said, I must once again say how compelling this story is.   I have been in a monogamus relationship for over ten years now and I think you are capturing the ebb and flow of a long term, loving relationship perfectly.  It is ringing very true to my experiences (well, except I am a hetro woman, of course :)

I was very glad to see this update in my inbox today.  I need a reminder of why I love the Harry Potter fandom so much...so, thank you again for your stories, they really make a difference in my life.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm really glad to hear you say that about the 'ebb and flow' of long term relationships, that is what I'm trying to show. I really enjoy your comments! :)