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She Will Have Music by Thistlerose Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Past Featured StoryTo say that fourteen-year-old Sirius Black has issues is to put things very mildly. Remus tries to help. Then he tries to resist. Then he comes to his senses. Or loses them. Whichever.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > School Days
Characters: Sirius Black, Remus Lupin
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4957 Read Count: 1514
[Report This] Published: 08/15/2006 Updated: 08/15/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/25/2006 Title: Chapter 1: She Will Have Music

Wow. I am blown away by the many layers of emotions that this ellicits.  How sweet, sad, hopeful and melancholy all rolled into one.  Glad it won the fic-of-the-year thing, so I got to read it

Surrogate by Leviathan Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Ron and Hermione need Harry's help, for the most important reason in the world. But can Harry pay the price?


Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Major Fluff, Strong Language, Violence
Series: The "Half-a-Ron" Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3130 Read Count: 1338
[Report This] Published: 08/17/2006 Updated: 08/17/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/20/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my, interesting ending!  I loved the stuff you left unsaid, they made me think more about the story that way.  And the levetating cup?  How did you ever come up with that?

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind words!

And the levetating cup? How did you ever come up with that?

Well, I started with "Half-a-Ron," and asked myself what would be the most desirable way for him to get around, in the wizarding world. When you have magic, who needs a wheelchair?

The Greatest Magic by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Ron has hidden the loss of his magic from everyone. How did it happen and why? A story of the true power of love.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11722 Read Count: 1551
[Report This] Published: 08/22/2006 Updated: 02/11/2007
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/2006 Title: Chapter 2: The Truth About Ron

What a place to stop!  Well, I can tell you, I am definitely hooked!  I like that you have given some hints as to what is about to come, but yet,I don't feel like I know what the rest of story will bring.  Great job

If a Man Answers by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 218]
Summary: When Ron comes back after two years, he dreads another man answering Hermione's door in the middle of the night. He certainly didn't expect the other man to be Harry. Jealousy, sex, betrayal, confusion, and heartache ensue.  Unfortunately, all is not as it should be and Ron must survive the unexpected consequences of his return, including broken relationships and promises.

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Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40051 Read Count: 29195
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2006 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/04/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelations

Oh dear.  I wasn't expecting that. 

I just loved the mixing of the present and past, very well done, sweet and hot all rolled in one.



Author's Response:

thank you so much, I really appreciate your thoughts...  unfortunately, the unexpected probably will not stop here for our dear Ron.

*a lovely chocolate-covered cherry for you* 

Harry Potter and the Unwinnable Fight by Leviathan Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: When Harry and Hermione disappear before his eyes, Ron Weasley will do whatever it takes to bring them back.
But while Ron fights to save them, Harry and Hermione are lost in a world where the only thing they have is each other...
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Various
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41005 Read Count: 4712
[Report This] Published: 08/28/2006 Updated: 08/28/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Harry Potter and the Unwinnable Fight

There are not words enough to tell you how much I LOVE this story. 

I knew I should have written notes, because right now I can't think to tell you what I loved the best.  Some highlights: I loved the brown "markings" in the beginning and that you included her period...some parts of life that never make it into stories or movies.  I loved that line about Harry always being gentle with her.  I loved Victor.  All of him. And the circle of guilt and passion and how they thought of Ron first, after the first time. 

Wonderful, brilliant; a story I am sure to read over and over again.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm thrilled that you've enjoyed it.

Credit whee it's due: Hermione's cycle features in the story thanks to two live journal users: mrsquizzical and harry_lvr. Mrs. Q was the one who mentioned to me that they'd been there over a month, and what was up with Hermione's cycle, and when I initially replied that I hadn't even thought of it,and supposed I assumed that the environment just took care of it, she mentioned that it would frighten Harry. So the power of that scene is due to her. And Harry_Lvr mentioned that a cycle can be up to two weeks late if a woman has just started exercising a lot, and her line became Hermione's.

I'm vastly pleased with and proud of this story, and it just transports me to know that it's worked for you.

A Trail of Persimmon by Thevina Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Harry means well, going to talk to Ron's shocked family after Ron's announcement that he's gay- even though Ron specifically tells him not to. And who is the mystery bloke Ron fancies? Sometimes things the most obvious are also the least apparent.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9409 Read Count: 1138
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2006 Updated: 09/04/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Trail of Persimmon

Lovely, lovely.  Excellent from start to finish.  I especialy loved this line:He was undone and rebound,  What an excellent line.

Author's Response: Many thanks for your kind words! That particular line really resonated with one of my betas as well; I'm so glad it's effective and conveyed Harry's change in an eloquent way. Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

One True Pairing by Mad Maudlin Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Ron and Hermione are worried about Harry. They probably should be.

Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1749 Read Count: 465
[Report This] Published: 09/11/2006 Updated: 09/11/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One True Pairing

Thanks for the laugh.  It was needed on a dreary day like today

Wedding correspondence by alloy Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA Weasley wedding night (weekend)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Fred Weasley, George Weasley
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 559 Read Count: 1560
[Report This] Published: 09/19/2006 Updated: 09/19/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/14/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Correspondence

Thanks for the laugh! 'Twas much needed

Author's Response: Thanks for the review

Make You Feel Pretty - An Ugly Girls Story by alloy Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Can Ron Weasley make the most important girl in his life feel pretty? An Ugly Girls Story, an outtake from the Smell of Lavender.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, OFC, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Minor Fluff
Series: Ugly Girls Club
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1232 Read Count: 1828
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2006 Updated: 10/13/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/13/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Make You Feel Pretty

Very interesting, and unique idea.  I loved your take on Ron, and how the book is filled with Weasley men.  One question:  Is the book only about Weasley's or are they just over-represented? 

Author's Response: Well presented, I suspect even the likes of Albus Dumbledore and Alaster Moody are in there.

Take It Back by alloy Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Summer after the Order of the Phoenix. Ron Weasley's acting a bit weird.

"Could I have your telephone number?"

It took Hermione a moment to register what Ron had asked. He had asked it in a completely normal way; just an ordinary guy asking an ordinary girl for her contact details.

That was the problem, Ron Weasley was not an ordinary guy, he was a Wizard, from a long line, and large family of wizards.

Written Prior to HBP, (Beta'ed by Sandy)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11474 Read Count: 6005
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2006 Updated: 05/22/2007
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed
Date: 03/24/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Of Howlers & Telephones

Thanks for this, I really needed a nice, light story at the moment.  I loved your take on Hermoine's parents...They are exactly as I would picture them: open minded, and fair, but with limits.

I might just run off and see if I can't find more of this story archived some where else!

All That They Had Not Lost by Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary: The rest of the world had ceased to exist outside of their circle. Outside of their search. That would they do now they had found what they had been looking for, and it was all destroyed? So much had been lost in the process.

Written pre Deathly Hallows.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: All That They Had Not Lost
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27572 Read Count: 20174
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2006 Updated: 02/28/2007
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/19/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Chosen Ones

I really liked this chapter...its nice to see them work out the complexities of a threesome, instead of having everything work out perfectly from the beginning like most stories.  I also, oddly enough, really liked how you handled Harry's panic attack at the end.  Very interesting

Author's Response:

i'm glad you like that. the working out is what it's all about for me....

thanks.

Q

Bath Interrupted by Dee Ryma Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry and Ginny try to get some alone time in the Prefect's Bath. They fail. Appearances by Ron, Hermione, and an unwelcome spirit.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het, Minor Fluff
Series: Demelza House Fundraiser
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2008 Read Count: 5490
[Report This] Published: 10/15/2006 Updated: 10/15/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/17/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Bath Interrupted- Demelza House

Frolicking rabbits, Dean strutting around yelling, Here I am, look at my wondrous specimen of manhood  Too funny!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. First time-het writer's nerves are soothed.

Like Velvet by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A razor, a birthday and a surprise.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Bondage, Het, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1829 Read Count: 2193
[Report This] Published: 10/15/2006 Updated: 10/15/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/17/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Like Velvet

Two things: One, never thought of shaving as foreplay

Two:  Snakes on the ceiling!  Pure genius.



Author's Response: I'm not quite sure where the bunny for this came from, but until I wrote it, I'd never thought of shaving as foreplay either!

Thanks for the review.

On The Beach by alloy Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A magical Island, a family vacation....Weasley's Weasley's Weasley's on Holiday
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: OFC, OMC
Genres: Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2640 Read Count: 642
[Report This] Published: 10/18/2006 Updated: 10/18/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: On the Beach

Lovely interlude in the day.

I love seeing these people in the future, it is so nice to be able to drop in on their lives from time to time. 

And yes, Broken Telephone, IMO, is the Muggle game of passing messages to the next person in line and seeing how muddled up they become by the end.  Right?



Author's Response: Right, thanks for reviewing

On the Rag by alloy Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Once a month the men in Hermione's life become 'Dicks'. Not everything in the future is perfect. (Author's note: This story is set post Voldemort, and assumes that the final battle left the Trio with a strong sense of empathy between them.)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: OFC, OMC
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4343 Read Count: 1818
[Report This] Published: 10/19/2006 Updated: 12/06/2006
Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/21/2006 Title: Chapter 1: On The Rag

I'm not too sure if I do take offense or not ;)  It definitely makes me amused to think this is the guys version of what happens. 

My poor husband. :)

Seriously,I like the psychic connection, and the way she views their Quidditch practise.  Good job



Author's Response: Thanks