To say that fourteen-year-old Sirius Black has issues is to put things very mildly. Remus tries to help. Then he tries to resist. Then he comes to his senses. Or loses them. Whichever.
Wow. I am blown away by the many layers of emotions that this ellicits. How sweet, sad, hopeful and melancholy all rolled into one. Glad it won the fic-of-the-year thing, so I got to read it
Oh my, interesting ending! I loved the stuff you left unsaid, they made me think more about the story that way. And the levetating cup? How did you ever come up with that?
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind words!
And the levetating cup? How did you ever come up with that?
Well, I started with "Half-a-Ron," and asked myself what would be the most desirable way for him to get around, in the wizarding world. When you have magic, who needs a wheelchair?
What a place to stop! Well, I can tell you, I am definitely hooked! I like that you have given some hints as to what is about to come, but yet,I don't feel like I know what the rest of story will bring. Great job
Oh dear. I wasn't expecting that.
I just loved the mixing of the present and past, very well done, sweet and hot all rolled in one.
thank you so much, I really appreciate your thoughts... unfortunately, the unexpected probably will not stop here for our dear Ron.
*a lovely chocolate-covered cherry for you*
There are not words enough to tell you how much I LOVE this story.
I knew I should have written notes, because right now I can't think to tell you what I loved the best. Some highlights: I loved the brown "markings" in the beginning and that you included her period...some parts of life that never make it into stories or movies. I loved that line about Harry always being gentle with her. I loved Victor. All of him. And the circle of guilt and passion and how they thought of Ron first, after the first time.
Wonderful, brilliant; a story I am sure to read over and over again.
Lovely, lovely. Excellent from start to finish. I especialy loved this line:He was undone and rebound, What an excellent line.
Author's Response: Many thanks for your kind words! That particular line really resonated with one of my betas as well; I'm so glad it's effective and conveyed Harry's change in an eloquent way. Thank you for reading and leaving a review!
Thanks for the laugh. It was needed on a dreary day like today
A Weasley wedding night (weekend) Thanks for the laugh! 'Twas much needed
Author's Response: Thanks for the review
Very interesting, and unique idea. I loved your take on Ron, and how the book is filled with Weasley men. One question: Is the book only about Weasley's or are they just over-represented?
Author's Response: Well presented, I suspect even the likes of Albus Dumbledore and Alaster Moody are in there.
Thanks for this, I really needed a nice, light story at the moment. I loved your take on Hermoine's parents...They are exactly as I would picture them: open minded, and fair, but with limits.
I might just run off and see if I can't find more of this story archived some where else!
I really liked this chapter...its nice to see them work out the complexities of a threesome, instead of having everything work out perfectly from the beginning like most stories. I also, oddly enough, really liked how you handled Harry's panic attack at the end. Very interesting
Author's Response:
i'm glad you like that. the working out is what it's all about for me....
thanks.
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Harry and Ginny try to get some alone time in the Prefect's Bath. They fail. Appearances by Ron, Hermione, and an unwelcome spirit. Frolicking rabbits, Dean strutting around yelling, Here I am, look at my wondrous specimen of manhood Too funny!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. First time-het writer's nerves are soothed.
Two things: One, never thought of shaving as foreplay
Two: Snakes on the ceiling! Pure genius.
Lovely interlude in the day.
I love seeing these people in the future, it is so nice to be able to drop in on their lives from time to time.
And yes, Broken Telephone, IMO, is the Muggle game of passing messages to the next person in line and seeing how muddled up they become by the end. Right?
I'm not too sure if I do take offense or not ;) It definitely makes me amused to think this is the guys version of what happens.
My poor husband. :)
Seriously,I like the psychic connection, and the way she views their Quidditch practise. Good job
