Penname: ElizaBlack [Contact] Real name: Heba
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More Than Memories by Bluerain Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 499]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA night that starts out inflicting the pain and horror of war ends in a way Ron had never expected. A story of love that stands the test of time, and of a passion undeniable, even in the face of heart-wrenching betrayal. Written pre-HBP and is now AU :)
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: More Than Memories
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122649 Read Count: 267484
[Report This] Published: 10/06/2005 Updated: 06/12/2009
Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/2007 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Okay man, when I first read that there wasn't gonna be any smut I said to myself "uhhhh, I don't know!" But you rocked it out and made it your own! I loved it, dog!

 P.S. In my head it was supposed to be Randy Jackson from American Idol...not sure I did it right. :o)~ But anyway, great chapter. Can't wait for more!

Strawberry Jam by inell Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry, Hermione, and Ron have breakfast
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Slash, Strong Language, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2014 Read Count: 616
[Report This] Published: 04/18/2006 Updated: 04/18/2006
Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it. It was so sweet. Was it just me or was their a hint of Pregnant/Moody!Hermione?? Hmm, hehe. Great story, maybe an expansion in the near future, hopefully?? :o)~

Very Bad Things by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Ron and Hermione survive the war but suffer their worst attack on their final mission with Harry.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Non-Con, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22581 Read Count: 8947
[Report This] Published: 04/28/2006 Updated: 05/29/2006
Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Washing It Away

Wow, just...wow. It was so heart wrenching. Tears in my eyes...Hermione was like a ghost and Harry, oh man I felt for him. What kind of friend hasn't been in a situation where they felt helpless?

And then she says she wants Ron...that did it for me. I was a bumbling mess..(not a good thing for exam time :o)~) I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!!

Eliza :o)~



Author's Response:

Oh - I\'m sorry, I feel bad for enjoying making people so unhappy. :)

 She always wants her Ron, wouldn\'t you? ;) Thank you for taking the time, I really appreciate it, the next one will be up soon!

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Reluctant Night

I dunno what to say, it was painfully beautiful if that's possible. Ron's hurting but still looking out for Hermione. That's exactly how i pictured them going through hard times. Can't wait to see what happens.

 Eliza :o)~



Author's Response:

"Painfully beautiful"... I like that. Yes, Ron always looks out for his Hermione. :)

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Balance

And now the healing begins! woot woot!! I love how they balance each other out. The give and take, the push and pull...his ying to her yang...awesome. But I feel like there is still tons more to come. Hope its happy stuff hehe.

Author's Response:

Yes, that\'s what this chapter was all about, you got it! :)They are so well matched.

Thank you for writing!

Proxy by Matilda Bishop Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary: Ron’s role in Harry’s struggle with Voldemort puts unexpected pressure on Bill.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Bill Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Public Sex, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 157504 Read Count: 30915
[Report This] Published: 05/07/2006 Updated: 03/17/2008
Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ohhh, now we have an idea what's going on. Shows how tight a family is when they're all effected by one person. Keep up the good work.

Eliza :o)~



Author's Response: Oh, good point.  Never thought of it that way.  But Ron is making every one nuts.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/2006 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Hmm, problems might come around if Ron ever finds out about Harry and Bill...souring the passion and bond and all that, right...hehe. Love this story. Update soon!

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed
Date: 03/17/2008 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

You don't know how long I waited for the shower scene. Not so much for the sex, but for the cleanliness. It's like I could almost smell their stench and the odor of the room. Not necessarily a good thing for me, but definitely a compliment to your descriptive writing! Keep up the good work!!

Fighting the Wolf by Millieweasley Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Agreeing to infiltrate Greyback’s werewolves had seemed to be the right thing at the time, yet for every day and month that passed, Remus’s doubts grew as his longing for a real life increased. – Takes place from the end of OotP to the end of HBP and features both het and slash pairings.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Remus Lupin, Professor Sinistra
Genres: General, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Beastiality, Contains Spoiler for HBP, D/S, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Het, Masturbation, Non-Con, OC, Public Sex, Rimming, Slash, Strong Sexual Content, Violence, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51646 Read Count: 17432
[Report This] Published: 05/11/2006 Updated: 10/20/2006
Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/24/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Greyback

I really like this story. Usually any story with Remus glosses over the whole Greyback thing and concentrate on his relationship with Tonks. But this fic...it's painful, it's sad, it's amazing, it's beautiful...I love it, even though my favorite character is going through so much hurt.

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m so glad you like the story. I hope you\'ll like the rest of it as well :D

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Date: 08/19/2006 Title: Chapter 23: Trying to forget

Oooo I come back from vacation and I find this chapter! Lucian is starting to grow on me, and I think Remus is growing on Melanie. She seems more docile now than when we first met her. *sigh* Remus' affect on the ladies I suppose hehe.

Author's Response: I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner, and that I haven't updated. (A shame really since the entire story is completed ages ago and this is just plain laziness). Thank you so much for your comments. I'll try to be a better author and update the rest of the chapters as soon as possible.

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/28/2006 Title: Chapter 8: Fevered Dreams

*Sigh* You'd think the way he missed the love of another person Remus wouldn't be pushing Tonks away, and yet he's pushing her away with one hand and trying to grasp happiness with another. Another lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Remus is a bit messed up, and he does not get what is best for him *lol*. I'm glad you are still enjoying the story.

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Date: 06/02/2006 Title: Chapter 11: The Guest

You wanna hate Greyback, you really do, and then he goes and treats Remus like...a son? a lover? It's a strange dynamic, but he always takes care of Remus at the end. Good chapter, my favorite so far.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like the story and this chapter of course :D

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Date: 06/06/2006 Title: Chapter 13: Caught

Hmm, I have a feeling with all the times Greyback keeps defending Remus, his precious pup, when the poop hits the fan its gonna be total chaos. Things are gonna get ugggllllyyyyyy. And the rest of the pack is never really going to accept him, is it? Ah well, hopefully things with Tonks will get better... :o)~

Author's Response: Greyback is not going to be happy, that is true. As for the rest of the pack...*stays silent* :D

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/2006 Title: Chapter 14: Almost Enough

That was hot...wish I could write a sex scene like that, hehe. Can't wait to see the morning after!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. :D

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Date: 06/09/2006 Title: Chapter 16: Mine!

Damn him, he did it again. He's out to punish himself, I know it!

I loved the whole telekenitic conversation Remus and Tonks had. Wonderful touch. Just hope Melanie isn't the jealous type...hehe.



Author's Response:

Melanie doesn't have the selfesteem to be jealous, Greyback made sure of that, I'm afraid. And yes, sometimes you do wonder if Remus isn't out ot hurt himself.