Penname: Chickadee [Contact] Real name: Mary Rose
Member Since: 10/23/2007
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Stronger Than Me by risiepookie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Past Featured Story“Please,” he says huskily, “I want you so bad,” and he kisses her again. A sob catches in my throat as the angry tears begin their rise again. He’s never said those words to me and I can’t help but feel she has stolen words she has no right to.

She watches and she tries to understand why she wasn't enough for Ron.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2732 Read Count: 5203
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2007 Updated: 08/13/2007
Reviewer: Chickadee Signed
Date: 01/19/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Stronger Than Me

I'm extremely late to this party, but I couldn't help but leave a review for a fic this wonderful!

I can't be the only person who stopped and stared at the line where Ron tells Hermione he loves her and wonder what in the world was going on.  When it dawned on me, I laughed out loud at myself for not figuring out whose POV the story was seen from!  :D  I also can't be the only person to have to go back and read it again now that I'd realized who the narrator is!

Risie, this is excellent.  Wonderful work, as always!  :)



Author's Response:

Can't believe I didn't respond to this before now!  I didn't get the notification, so I apologize.  :o(  Thank you so much for reading and for the really lovely review, my dear friend!  I'm so glad you were caught up in thinking it was something else and that the bait-and-switch caught you off-guard.  That's exactly what I was hoping for. 

Thank you for the very kind words- much appreciated!  *chocolate covered strawberries for you*

The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship by shieldmaiden Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story“There are some things you can’t share without ending up liking each other…”
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 503 Read Count: 1402
[Report This] Published: 09/19/2007 Updated: 09/19/2007
Reviewer: Chickadee Signed
Date: 02/10/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship

This is perfectly titled - and the story is beautiful itself.  I loved it...excellent job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'm very happy you enjoyed it:)