Penname: MaybeOnce [Contact] Real name: May Wunce
Member Since: 09/30/2007
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The Glass Onion by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe war against Voldemort has just ended, and Lee has been attacked and hexed while minding the joke shop for the Twins. The near loss of his friend makes George face his feelings.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: George Weasley, Lee Jordan
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Frottage, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45552 Read Count: 51072
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2007 Updated: 11/12/2007
Reviewer: MaybeOnce Signed
Date: 11/12/2007 Title: Chapter 50: 50. Commitment

Oh, I'm so sorry this story is over....a beautiful, sexy love story.  Very well done.

Author's Response: Well thank you for reading! I appreciate your kind words, thank you very much!

Special Gifts by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured StoryTen years after a tragic accident costs Harry Potter the love of his life and leaves him with unexpected complications, he's called back from a life of self-imposed exile to the help the child of an old friend, with the help of an old adversary.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, EWE, Frottage, Hurt/Comfort, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129975 Read Count: 26891
[Report This] Published: 01/16/2008 Updated: 01/16/2010
Reviewer: MaybeOnce Signed
Date: 01/21/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: For the love of a child...

It's an interesting story, but I'm not sure I am grooving with your characterizations.   Honestly, after this chapter I am just left feeling sorry for Hermione and pretty much thinking that Ginny is a bitch and Draco is an asshole.   I mean, seriously, your husband and father of your child leaves you for the person who was your mutual best friend and you are supposed to accept it as "who he chose to love?"  I would expect a little more guilt and compassion all around, to be honest.  At the very least I think the story would benefit from a more nuanced treatment of the hurt and pain that went around.  Having Hermione become a moustache-twirling Evil Bitch From Hell who Is Against True Love kind of keeps the story as something less than it could be. 

Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you think.  However, you may find you don't like this one.  Thank you for your reveiw.

Memories as a Teacup by wook77 Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Four years ago, Dean Thomas died in the midst of a raid. Seamus saw it happen right in front of his eyes but seeing isn't believing and reality is in the eye of the beholder. (Dean/Seamus Slash)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Dean Thomas, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Slash, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64332 Read Count: 8537
[Report This] Published: 04/26/2008 Updated: 02/01/2011
Reviewer: MaybeOnce Signed
Date: 10/22/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad to see this story updated!   Great chapter, I can't wait for Dean to finally start remembering his relationship with Seamus...

Reviewer: MaybeOnce Signed
Date: 08/15/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I do hope you haven't abandoned this story! 

 

You are doing a great job with this and still keeping in canon characterizations.   I can't wait to read the rest of the story, especially when Dean finds out about his past, either by recovering memories or by hearing it from the others.  Did Dean date in the Muggle world?  Men or women, I wonder.....

 

Anyway, know that there are lots of readers looking forward to CH 8! 

Not a Memory Yet by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: In the months since the Battle of Hogwarts, Ron has been plagued with nightmares. Insecurities, doubts, and fears that were stirred up by wearing the locket Horcrux prevent him from moving forward. Can Hermione help save him from himself?

This fic is my submission for The Quidditch Pitch’s Ron-a-Thon silent auction. It was commissioned by the wonderful MrQuatto, who requested angst, smut, and Hermione finding out about Ron's Horcrux/locket experience and proving to him how wrong the locket was.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, RST, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28152 Read Count: 23732
[Report This] Published: 04/28/2008 Updated: 05/16/2008
Reviewer: MaybeOnce Signed
Date: 05/16/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Lost and Found

This was the most romantic, sexy, canontasticlicious (shut up.  it is SO a word) story I've read in a long time!   Great story, canon characterization, and, um,   oh, yes.   Teh Hot.  Yeay!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving an absolutely awesome review!  Canontasticlicious.  ::nods::  I LOVE that word.  ::grin::  I am so happy you found the story romantic, sexy, and in-character and hot- very exciting for me!  Thanks for your lovely words.  *root beer float for you*

Housesitting by deeptrubble Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Seamus plant-sits for Neville and makes some rather interesting discoveries.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Neville Longbottom, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Frottage, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3928 Read Count: 701
[Report This] Published: 05/21/2008 Updated: 05/21/2008
Reviewer: MaybeOnce Signed
Date: 05/23/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Housesitting

I've just read your 3 recent postings, and I have to say that I now officially LOVE your Slash! Seamus!  I'll definitely be looking for more Seamus stories from you...these are funny and feel very true to character!

Author's Response:

*blushes*

Thank you!!! :D