Date: 01/26/2009 04:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think you did an excellent job, not only in adapting the plot, but in the expressions of your characters. The only problem I have is that I don't think Harry would have taken to a person his father's age. An older man with a younger female, or older female with younger male- yes, but not male to male. That is the only thing that keeps me from giving the story top rating.
Date: 01/01/2009 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant! Don't know what else to say. I just found this archive & this story through someone else's old rec, & my only complaint is that this great story has been sitting around this long with me oblivious of it. Excellent adaptation, gorgeous characterizations, edge-of-your-seat excitement. I suffered along with my beloved Sev & his broken heart, admiring his extraordinary generosity & courage. My love of mush makes me with for a longer ending or maybe an epilogue in the same happy vein, but the story stayed true to the original (without the tragedy) & I couldn't ask for more. Thank you for the hours of great joy this story provided & will continue to provide as I re-read for years to come. Great job!
PS: Happy 2009!