Date: 12/28/2010 06:43 AM Title: Chapter Five
"Tina walked into the office carrying three cans of soda, breaking up their little talk. But each thought about the discussion as they continued their lesson." When did Tina arrive in NY and where did Lori go?
Date: 02/15/2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
first and foremost thank you for finally putting the finishing touches to this story. i've been waiting a long time for the conclusion and was thrilled when i happened to enter the pitch and see that the story was done. about time, mate. lol. anyhoo....brilliant! brilliant! brilliant!! that's the three words i use to describe this whole story. it was excellently written. it kept me on the edge of my seat and drew me in. i was there with hermione when she was taken. i cried with ron and harry when they subdued her and overjoyed when they were all reunited. excellent story. definitely gonna keep this as a fave. thank you for this wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and 'stuck with me' for so long!!!
Date: 04/24/2009 03:12 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
ok i went back and reread this, it's a very good story are you going to finish it?
when i seen this story before it was freaking me out, i love hermione and to think of her body being used like that just makes me mad.
but on the all and all, this is a very good story.
Date: 01/28/2009 12:16 PM Title: Prologue
when i read the title i was curious to read it so i did....MAN!!!!! i was blown away by this story. this is excellent...EXCELLENT writing. i'm not a fan of stories with reviews at the end of every chapter, tho. i know it's not u, but i like to read the whole thing first and then give my opinion; ergo our little problem. HOW COULD U LEAVE ME HANGIN' LIKE THIS??? lol. my only little thing is i believe it was written that harry told hermione that he could sense her anyhwere, so i thought that he'd at least try to locate her that way. then i thought that it would be kinda corny if u did it that way so bravo to u on the way u wrote it. my only other thing is why did it take so long for them to actually get it together to find her, let alone look for her? but again, ur story is brilliantly written and i'm gonna go back and read it again. JUST FINISH IT PLEASE!!!!