Date: 02/03/2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight: Brewing
your story is brilliant in the fact that i feel as if i'm part of the story. that's what i (and most readers) look for. for that moment, it was if i was standing there when harry yelled, "who the f**k invited fred?". so when the reply came back about it being a problem, i found myself placing myself in that scenario as harry; scolding the screen. "f**k yeah there's a problem!!" and played out a whole dialogue, just from being drawn into your writing. again....please, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you for explaining that. It's very flattering!
Date: 02/01/2014 06:52 AM Title: Chapter Eighty-Two: Dance
if i find myself looking at the screen, mouth agape about to go into my 'ghetto' neck-roll; talking about, 'oh, no he didn't' (say that) and then fly off into a rand/go trant (at the screen....into the bathroom and back) at all the possible retorts and comebacks....this is a damn fine story. lol.
Author's Response: I'm not sure if you're reacting to the character at the end of the chapter or to George or who, but thank you!
Date: 01/13/2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight: Brewing
if there's a story that i find interesting, that holds me as well as draws me in......i will stick with it until it's done (as it seems to be the case with 'leviathan'). i really enjoy the story and the fact that it caters to my 'trio' fetish, magnifies the pleasure of reading greatly. this is definitely one of the select few (in my opinion) that would make a good movie as it already stands as a great read. ta!!
Author's Response: You're very kind.