Date: 02/15/2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty funny!
i especially liked, "Instead, he told Bill and they took Harry out for breakfast." Nice work!
Author's Response:
Yes, I thought Bill and Charlie would be a lot scarier than their parents. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02/14/2012 05:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
ahahahahahahahaha! Good one. I could just feel the...awkwardness. Honestly, I was expecting it to be a hysteral Ron...or Ron and Hermione...so it was a nice surprise to find Charlie and his girlfriend. Poor Harry, though. lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for such a nice review.