Date: 01/02/2012 11:23 PM Title: Zenith
Yay, you finished it! And a very nice ending it is. I like the way you allow your characters' stories to gradually unfold. Thanks for another great tale.
And it is now nearly 1:30 am and I must go to bed.
Mark and Lavender will return in a story called Moons.
Thank you, and goodnight. :-D
Date: 12/08/2011 09:05 PM Title: Occlusion
As usual, you set up the scene beautifully. (I just finished reading the Outlander series, so the "accent" was easy to understand.)
Author's Response: Thank you. Finding the balance between realistic, understandable and offputting accents is a problem. I'm glad you think I succeeded. -N-