Date: 11/20/2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was a interesting little romp. In the first chapter the writing felt a bit pedestrian. However, as the story went on the language flowed more smoothly and the pacing improved. I am glad you took the time to write it, and even more pleased that I got to read it. Thanks.
Date: 05/24/2011 09:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
omg...this was incredibly hot!!! would have been interesting to see what ron would have thought about it and see the kind of fun they would've had together. still and all a very good read.!!!!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I sure enjoyed writing it. I may write a Ron/Hermione/Pansy addition, but as it stands the story is complete.