Hmm...  I don't care for Harry/Draco, I'm not into slash, student/teacher creeps me out a bit, and I like mostly canon stories.  So, why did I read this? 

Because it's well written, characters showed growth and humanity, and I love relationship driven stories.

I'm impressed by your writing, and I do like the story very much.  I think you did a fabulous job!  I usually don't begin reading this genre, but, I'm really glad I did.  You raised some great thinking points along with the general romance, and I liked your Harry and Draco, both.  Neville was well done, too.  I like his Brew Club.  (Sorry, I feel like I'm being very stilted, but, can't seem to stop myself.  I hope my enjoyment/appreciation of your work comes through!)