Date: 12/13/2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
love, love, love, love this! so funny, so sweet. i see it happening exactly as written. good job!
Date: 12/11/2010 08:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I especially liked the ending. He didn't mess up and he gets extra toast!
Date: 12/11/2010 02:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for another laugh, today! You've got a way with comedy. I loved Ron's smart remark, "Wonderful. I hope you two will be very happy together," the most!