Date: 08/03/2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! I'm intrigued already and can't wait to see where we go with this! It's lovely to think of Tonks surviving. (Though, I'm going to maintain a futile hope that Harry and Ginny will reconcile. You don't mind, do you? I'm hopeless that way.)
Date: 07/30/2010 09:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
You have such a wonderful way with words - ""... like sunshine bottled up as perfume ...", and I love your reference to Mickey Mouse. Overall, I'm intrigued with where you are taking us with your tale. I'm adding this to my favorites and will look forward to installments.