Date: 09/23/2010 02:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
two words......KEEP WRITING!!!! ok, make it three...PLEASE keep writing. i can go for four...PRETTY PLEASE keep writing....!!!!
XD Well, thank you for the avid support. I will be continuing the series, but it just takes a while. I'm a singer and designer by nature, not a writer, so writing can be a little laborious for me if I don't take it in stride.
Again, though, I WILL be continuing this, so fret not. ^-^
Date: 04/27/2010 10:42 AM Title: Prologue: Left in the Dust
I like it a lot so far. And don't worry, I forgive you for ending the Voldemort saga before the story even began. It's better than other stories that take place during the trio's Hogwarts years where there is no explanation for the lack of a war going on. But really, I like the characterizations so far. Neville isn't a simpering idiot, and I appreciate it. I'm interested to see what Ron is feeling and if he'll end up confiding to Harry the way Neville (unwillingly, perhaps)did.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I agree about Neville. He's usually made to seem a little stupid. I try to avoid that, but I'm a little afraid of how it'll look in the first and second chapters, now. His nerves get the better of him, and he tends to ramble a lot because of it...