Date: 02/16/2010 10:29 AM Title: Date Night
Wow! That was terrific! It was very sexy, but even better, you managed to flesh out a real sense of the relationship between Draco and Asteria. You've done a great job of showing the man he has become. And, just the smallest little hint of Bellatrix that you gave us served to further enhance her image as a completely depraved madwoman. Nice job all around!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02/16/2010 09:52 AM Title: Date Night
Before I even read the story, I want to say 'thank you' for spelling it 'Asteria'! Ooh, it grates on my nerves through a whole piece when I read 'Astoria'! JKR has always said that she collects names, and appears to use them very deliberately. Asteria fits right in with the star references for Draco and Scorpius. Astoria, on the other hand, seems to be nothing more than a place name. Thank you so much for not only using the correct spelling, but also for pointing out that you are doing so!