Date: 02/05/2010 08:51 PM Title: The One Where Ron and Hermione Fine Out
When I initially looked at this I thought oh no there'll be mistakes galore but I decided to read and I'm so glad I did because this was fantastic. The barn incident in the beginning was well written and so interesting I loved the fact that you put in details that showed exactly how they were feeling and thinking. A great start, I also loved your Draco he wasn't a pushover but he was thoughtful and I liked that also liked the fact that Herm didn't forget what he did, it wasn't just skated over and to me that made it more real. Great Job I'll definitely be on the lookout for more of your work :)
Author's Response: I had no idea what you were talking about for a second. I fixed the title typo! Ha. In my defense, I've had jury duty all week and I have a five month old baby. Thank you for reading and loving.