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Reviewer: SlytherinRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2009 04:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Note to author:  It is probably best to stay in the same Point of View unless you separate sections with a clear separation.  It was difficult to figure out when Harry or Ron was speaking and even when you could tell it was annoying to find that suddenly the Point of View changed.

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