Date: 11/11/2009 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Delicious, but then there was never any doubt.
I love, love, love the part where Harry is watching them sleep and just opens with 'comfortable?'
And Ron and Severus together are just so... smouldery here, the tension is strong and I love it.
You really should write more often, you need to know how good at it you are.
Author's Response: Thank you - I take that as quite a recommendation. ;)
Date: 10/21/2009 06:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like. Interesting universe. I never saw Snape being much into flying himself but I'm getting it here. Looking forward to the next chapter. I love your Ron btw and Harry is right in character too.
Thanks - the last chapter will be up soon.
Date: 10/20/2009 09:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
The thought of Ron as Severus Snape's brandy pourer and bed warmer makes me all shivery. I don't know why, it's just the way you've written it. *shivers*
Your Ron is very self assured, I like that and I LOVE that Severus is having to contemplate cold showers to stop thinking about him. Especially when we can tell it won't work.
I repeat -MMM. I am envious of the way you take to the sports world so easily, I know i'd be rubbish if I tried. And of course, sweaty Quidditch players are always a bonus!Fabulous job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I love the tussle between them - Come back soon Chapter 3/Final will be up soon.
Date: 09/28/2009 01:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh.... looks great! Can't wait for more! Do be aware of your pronoun references; a bunch of times I wasn't sure which 'he' referred to which person!
Love the premise and your storytelling! Definitely hope you keep going with this!
Yes the joy of slash - which he do you mean?
Date: 09/26/2009 04:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes!!!! He needs to go for a drink!!!
Mmm, I do so love Quidditch Ron. Interesting premise, too... Harry and Severus working together, not killing one another...
How long before someone snogs someone else in the locker room, or the office? Or by gum will it be the showers? *drool*
More please! :D
Author's Response: Not so fast - all in good time