[Report This]Date: 03/27/2011 02:26 PM Title: Mommie Dearest
deenas!
I made it back over to TQP and I'm still reading! I miss your writing and hope you have it in you to push out another chapter. Your Draco development is a great success and very impressive for not having ever written Draco in lead before! Kudos and best wishes :)
-FreeRaven
Date: 02/16/2010 09:43 AM Title: Mommie Dearest
Thanks for another great chapter! Narcissa's madness is a nice touch. It makes it even easier, I think, for Draco to recreate himself into a man he will respect. I know I've said this before, but, your Asteria is just wonderful. When JKR first revealed her, I imagined her as a copy of Narcissa. I've read others who compared her to Hermione, and I like that image. But, I'm really connecting with this version of her. I like that she is imperfect, yet perfect for Draco. Draco's reaction to Ginny's labor, or rather, to the importance of that for Harry, is a terrific illustration of how much Draco is changing.
Date: 10/15/2009 08:11 PM Title: Love Actually
That's the most moving visit I've ever made to Stonehenge. Nice work!
Date: 10/15/2009 10:59 AM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Another terrific chapter! I really like your Asteria. She's cheeky, but kind. Both she and Draco seem to have some real depth to them. (I never expected to be a Draco fan, but you and a few other authors are opening my mind. grinning)
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2009 10:55 PM Title: First Contact
*Hesitates, peeks in...and gets hooked by surprise!* Okay, I'm not a big Draco lead man fan myself, but I love canon and for some reason, I've fallen in love with a fantastical ideal of who Asteria Greengrass is...I will support you in this and am looking forward to seeing this pair development separately and individually! Good job so far!!
Date: 10/13/2009 06:09 AM Title: Love Actually
Interesting, I loved the story of Stonhenge. You are making me "like" Draco and I love Asteria. It's rather nice feeling peaceful reading about Draco rather than angry. Looking for more.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2009 06:56 PM Title: First Contact
Good start....Draco is so darn hard....he should let her help him.....I guess crying in front of her is softening a bit!! I hope she can save him.
Date: 09/26/2009 08:36 AM Title: First Contact
I love your story.. more more pleaseee!!
great story I love this Draco... great idea focus in him and not in the trio
Date: 09/25/2009 08:14 AM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Well, I enjoyed chapter 2 as much as chapter 1. I do like the interaction between Draco and Teri. She's good for him.
I laugh at Draco and Ron's animosity toward each other. They may never be close friends, but I think they will learn to respect each other.
"Son of gram" laughed out loud. I love when writers come of with these cute little things.
Waiting for chapter 3.
Date: 09/24/2009 04:12 AM Title: First Contact
Excellent! Great story, well written, unique take on Draco, great dialog. Can't wait for Ch 3!
Date: 09/17/2009 09:55 PM Title: First Contact
Very nice; good characterizations, and I love what you've done with Asteria. Look forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2009 11:15 AM Title: First Contact
Very interesting--normally I'm an H/D fan, but this is a fascinating story. Great idea, too--very original.
[Report This]Date: 09/15/2009 12:01 PM Title: First Contact
This is awesome Deena! This is by far the best Asteria I've ever read! I can't wait for chapter 2!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter two is full of surprises! And not just with Asteria.
Date: 09/14/2009 02:24 PM Title: First Contact
I put off reading this as I'm a total Ron/Hermione fan, but I must say "good start". I'll be back for more.
I really like your Asteria. Draco does need someone who can stand up to his "up bringing".
This is really interesting and I can't wait to see how you go with this.Author's Response: Thanks for giving this a chance. I can't help myself with this and it's just pouring out of me.
Date: 09/11/2009 07:11 AM Title: First Contact
Great first chapter, already got me hooked for the next chapters: it seems a very interesting journey with Draco and Asteria has begun and I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to know that people are reading it and wow! Liking it!