Date: 10/14/2011 07:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
You've captured my attention! Nice first chapter!




[Report This]Date: 01/30/2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh My Goodness, WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!? Absolutely brilliant, I'm kinda hooked!
Date: 09/05/2009 09:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
holy shit!!!!how could you start us out like this and not post the next chapter....well all i can say is that if the rest of this story is any thing like the first chapter then it will be good....I WILL BE LOOKING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.