Date: 07/21/2009 08:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
This has the makings of a really good story, although the summary says it's complete and it feels yet unfinished. It's an entirely plausible storyline because I always thought the frequent mentions of the Draught of Living Death and Snape having said he could "even put a stopper in death" just begged to be utilized somewhow ... and this would have been the perfect way. But even though your fic has its happy ending, it seems like there should be more to it? Is a relationship developing between Harry/Severus? And what made Ron even think there might be consequences for the two of them with the Ministry? I enjoyed what you have, but I'd really like to see you take it farther.