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Reviewer: theelderwyrm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice! Seriously hot.  The back and forth from one character to another every paragraph was a little confusing at first, but it straightened itself out.  I like how you dealt with the taboo, the concern about it but at the same time letting it fuel the passion.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed the story.  I tried to tame the back and forth as this was originally written as a role play, sorry it still reads as a bit confusing.  I love the Ron/Ginny taboo, and trying to write it so it "works." :)

Reviewer: iris m Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 05:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

ok for one this was so nut-nut f'n hot..yea i went stright for the nut-nut I know. two I hope you do another one and yes this perv says ron and ginny can do it, might as well they almost did in this. and i know you can make it so hot. i just loved this story it was hot, sweet and most of all loving...good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you found it hot and sweet and loving, that is what we were going for.  We have written a Ron/Ginny/Pansy in which Ron and Ginny well...I think you'd be pleased.  I hope to get it posted soon. :)

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