Date: 11/15/2008 11:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Nice. I'll take that for a happy ending. It's pretty well written, but feels like it should have been fleshed out into more chapters. I wish we'd gotten a more clear idea of just what Ron blew the whistle on. Still, I enjoyed it quite a bit, thanks!
Author's Response: You know, I never meant for this piece to be published outside my website. It was uploaded for me by friends here. It's as close to a happy ending as we'll see. ;) rnrnThe sense of incompleteness has to do with the fact that this was just an additional scene written for those who asked in LJ, rather than any genuine addition to the series. I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I'm contemplating pulling it from the Quidditch Pitch. rn
Date: 11/15/2008 11:17 AM Title: The Begining
This is an intriguing little piece. Bits of the premise make me think of Pete Rose and his little gambling scandal. (I don't think he got a fair shake. He never bet against his own team.) I like your Ron, he's very straight up. I'm off to the next chapter to see how you've wrapped this up.
Author's Response: Ah, very observant of you. In fact, I had Pete Rose in mind when I wrote it. I don't believe he got a fair shake either. I always suspected there was much more beneath the surface of that situation.