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Reviewer: Manopeluda Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I noticed you never wrote here again, yet, I think I recognize your style.  Good fic. 

Reviewer: juice14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2009 07:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm normally H/G but this story was pretty well written. You made the intimacy between the teens something tender and magical. Good descriptive narrative with my personal fave, romantic smut ;)

Reviewer: HarriNotY Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2009 08:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great Story.

In the beginning I thought, she behaves more like Ginny than Hermione. But if Hermione is determined to lead Harry on the right way, even if he is too dense to find it himself ...

What I miss a little is the the ecstasy of a new relationship with holding hands, touching and kissing at every opportunity. It would help the reader if the atmosphere were more palable.

But all this is complaining on a very high level.

Hope we can have more from you!


Reviewer: Baby Boomer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 05:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful story, I loved it!  Look forward to more.

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