Date: 05/03/2009 08:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
In the beginning I thought, she behaves more like Ginny than Hermione. But if Hermione is determined to lead Harry on the right way, even if he is too dense to find it himself ...
What I miss a little is the the ecstasy of a new relationship with holding hands, touching and kissing at every opportunity. It would help the reader if the atmosphere were more palable.
But all this is complaining on a very high level.
Hope we can have more from you!