Date: 01/23/2009 12:41 PM Title: Twenty-Five: Gringotts Again
You do such a great job conveying the immediacy of everything. I wanted to take my time reading this chapter, I'm trying to stretch things out since we're right here at the end. Instead, I felt as though my eyes were flying over the words! (I'll just have to reread it, won't I? smiling)
Date: 01/20/2009 12:33 PM Title: Twenty-Four: Crowded House
Poor Ron. I, too, tried to come up with a million ways to explain Dumbledore's death as a fake. I suspect many other readers did the same. We all knew, though, that it was real. Just like Harry said, we learned our lesson with Sirius. Gripping update, Thanks.
Date: 01/20/2009 12:21 PM Title: Twenty-Three: Shell Cottage
Dobby's death and funeral move me as much as they do every time I read of them. No matter whom the author is. You handled it very well, I think. I like that Ron mourned Scabbers/Wormtail, and that he needed a release from things he'd seen and been through so recently. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2009 10:57 AM Title: One: Wollongong
I check everyday for updates to this story. I love your characterizations, and the depth you've added to Hermione especially.
Date: 01/14/2009 08:35 PM Title: Twenty-Two: Seized
Oooh....This is simply fabulous! Just amazing. I'm so focused on it, I don't think I'll ever be able to get to sleep tonight! Fantastic work!
Date: 01/12/2009 08:50 AM Title: Twenty-One: Rain
Nice job conveying the monotony and the length of the hunt. I liked the boys evasiveness concerning Ron's gift to Harry! Pretty funny!
Date: 01/12/2009 08:24 AM Title: Twenty: Xenophilius Lovegood
This is as good as ever. Once again, you have me following along so closely that I have to remind myself that I know how the tale ends. Nice work!
[Report This]Date: 01/09/2009 08:43 PM Title: Nineteen: Doe, a Deer
Just so awesome. I love your Hermione, and I love her POV.
Date: 01/08/2009 05:31 PM Title: Nineteen: Doe, a Deer
Questions, questions, so many questions for our Hermione. Her mind must have been spinning at Ron returning. I'm glad you had her address her dreams of Harry and wondering if they'd go away.
Date: 01/04/2009 11:45 PM Title: Eighteen: Godric's Hollow
I nearly felt like throwing up while reading JKR's description of Bathilda Bagshot's house and Hermione's and Harry's time there. I'm grateful you didn't go into quite that much detail! This is another excellent update. You capture the poignancy of the graveyard, and Hermione's worry about Harry at the end.
Date: 01/03/2009 12:55 PM Title: Seventeen: Alone
Another insightful update. I like the way Hermione's dreams are a reflection of her possibilities. I think they are a good way for her to sort out her thoughts and emotions.
Date: 12/30/2008 04:02 PM Title: Sixteen: Rebound
I loved Phineas as JKR wrote him, and I'm glad to see him again! He's a sneaky bastard, but, somehow, I just enjoy his character.
Date: 12/30/2008 03:18 PM Title: Fifteen: Wye
My heart is breaking for them.
Date: 12/30/2008 02:57 PM Title: Fourteen: Reliving
Heavens! At least poor Hermione has a healthy sex life when she's dreaming!
Date: 12/26/2008 03:00 PM Title: One: Wollongong
I love this story so far, I love this series, and I love your Hermione! I look forward to signing into TQP every day to see if you've updated!