Date: 09/19/2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh dayuuuum. Well I knew all of that (obviously) but hearing about it from this kind of story-telling persepective straight from the source n now looking at how rose might take it (to be dating their grandson)... damn....
Date: 09/19/2012 09:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's so funny how she thinks she's a slag just cuz he wont shag her. Lol. He's such a sensitive little twit 2. I love how you have these little communication issues that no one usually includes but are a big part of ALL new relationships. :) Love it.
Date: 09/19/2012 09:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love the fact that you made her losing her virginity realistic. Most writers just make it this incredible experience that's WOW, but it IS a huge emotional ordeal and it's something you can't reverse. So i looove how you did that. :) Pretty glad that Scorp isn't such a manwhore n was only with the one girl 2. :)