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Reviewer: Jennifer Esther Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2011 07:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved the last line

excellent characterization



Author's Response: Thanks very much :)

Reviewer: HOCRUX Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 09:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

That's a good story. keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2008 05:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Whew!  That was...um...inspiring!

Seriously, I liked the way you handled this.  Obviously, I think the physical activity was well written, (very well written,); but I like the way you handled the emotional aspect, too.  The affection between the characters has a strong presence without being too much.  After all, they know they love eachother, it's the action they've been without!

And I love the funny bits sprinkled here and there.  The spiderman kiss reaction was hysterical, and Hermione's reaction to her book was perfect!  Thanks for sharing with us!



Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a wonderful review. The emotional part of my stories are always the most important for me, even when I'm writing smut. I love seeing a real connection between the characters so I'm glad that came across for you :)

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