Date: 07/29/2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a bit surprised that Harry wasn't more hesitant or angry or something at the beginning and excited to get to know your characterization of him in the next chapters. This is a really interesting plot set-up and one I never would have thought of with Harry's parents involved. I'm curious about the details as the story continues!
Date: 07/29/2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh, that's an enlightening memory! interesting!
Date: 07/29/2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh, that's an enlightening memory! interesting!
Date: 07/29/2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a bit surprised that Harry wasn't more hesitant or angry or something at the beginning and excited to get to know your characterization of him in the next chapters. This is a really interesting plot set-up and one I never would have thought of with Harry's parents involved. I'm curious about the details as the story continues!
Date: 10/17/2008 01:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
i liked this last chapter....but i just love ron.. nice work.
now that the story is moving on it's making for a good read.
Date: 08/23/2008 04:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
ok the story was abit strange for me...and i like strange.
ok i was thinking about it and i know what it is, the last 2 chapters i kept reading but the last 2 chapters alittle gross....
i mean come on, his own pee back in....where did that come from?