Date: 08/26/2008 06:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
i thought this was decent, not specatular but not a piece of shite either. i was confused at the end when you repeating the stuff at the beginning. also i think you should have revealed more of remus' pain, really get inside his head to make the readers feel for him, make them cry. you know?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Megan. This was the first fic I've ever written, so it's kind of raw and immature. I like to think I've come a long way since (it's been ten months or something) and I'm trying to get better at it, especially while writing the sequel.