Date: 07/08/2008 03:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. You capture a really good brother/sister dynamic here and it rings true. They're not yet as easy with each as they will be when they're both married and raising families of their own, but they've moved on a long way since Ginny was experimenting with boys and Ron wanted to thump anyone who looked at his sister. There's a mature sibling relatonship in the making here.
The ghoul, and making space for Harry, are nice background touches, as is Ron's awareness of what time Harry went to bed.
A nice job, willowwand - thank you.