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Reviewer: severusandlilyalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2011 09:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love this so much. and it fits perfecttly with the story and there is no stupid guestures that the chafacters wouldnt normally do. love love love.

Reviewer: cheeky_squirrel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 09:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was truly beautiful, sweetie. It really gave the reader a chance to understand more about Snape. It was well written, flowed well, and had very few grammatical mistakes (however, you did not place speech marks at the end of Lily's speech when she said "I knew you weren't listening! And you honestly call yourself my friend!"

Thank you very much for sharing!

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