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Reviewer: MoonyLight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good god! That, was so pretty hot smut!!|Loved it! (If i were to die now I'd die happy)

I have to say I love last lines, and yours was perfect! As per usual to the best endings it can be taken two ways: He never spied on the girls' showers cause he's more attracted to guys OR he's gonna boot it over there right now.

Good job

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!! I think that may have been the filthiest thing I've written to date. As for the last line, I felt obligated to at least try to steer it back into canon territory if possible. I'm so glad you liked it!!! :D

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