Date: 07/28/2011 08:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I truly liked the way you handeled Hermione's mood and emotions. I really liked the way the story developed and the reader did not know why Hermione didn't want to leave until the end of the story.
I look forward to more of your work
Date: 05/20/2008 06:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful. Made my heart-ache, letting go is so hard. Hoping that if you don't face what is outside the door, it will make it all go away. Things will turn back to the way they were supposed to be, been there. This story just makes me want to give a big hug and kiss to all those wonderful people around me.
Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad that the story was interesting to read and that the emotion came across well. Thanks for taking the time to review!