Date: 06/03/2008 05:17 AM Title: Twenty-Two Months Later: Housewarming
This looks sweet to read, but I'll read it when it's finished. I never read a fic in less it's finished for the fear it may never be completed. To many has let me down so I'll read it when it's complete, I'm sure it'll be great, any thing that has Ron and Hermonie and fun smut is always a great combo.
Author's Response: Well, if it helps any, the story IS completed, with every chapter currently sitting on my computer. It's simply taking a while to get everything posted because it's being beta'd on a chapter-by-chapter basis, and between our schedules it's gonna be spread out over the next few months. But feel free to start reading, as I PROMISE it will all be posted eventually!
Date: 05/29/2008 10:41 AM Title: Twenty-Two Months Later: Housewarming
Oh, just wonderful first times! Ginny and Hermione were so wonderfully in character. I've always felt Ginny would be a real animal in bed, while Hermione would approach lovemaking like everything else, calmly and logically. And, best of all, they both got what they wanted! Very good!
Date: 05/24/2008 07:47 AM Title: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw
This is good. You should have more reviewers. Heck, I should have left a review. Sorry.
Ron talking to himself about Ginny and then talking to himself about himself was brilliantly done. Who knew he was so introspective?
What a contrast between H/G and R/H! And I liked them both. The realism of R/H's time along with all their insecurities; and the surrealism of H/G with Ginny's playfulness contagiously infecting Harry. Nice job.
Date: 04/27/2008 09:16 PM Title: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw
Terrific chapter, I really like your treatment of Luna. I also see her as every bit as smart as Hermione. The conversation about existence was perfect. The humor worked quite well too, comedy is the hardest thing to write.
Date: 04/26/2008 05:30 AM Title: Eleven Months Later-Scrubbing Bubbles
A most amusing and tittilating chapter. I love how Harry and Ginny are still so shy and unsure. And the voyeur mermaid is too much! You should write a few stories about her observing other couples!
Date: 04/21/2008 10:28 AM Title: Three Months Later - Our Little Wilkins
great story so far :)
you know, for a moment, I was worried that the Grangers might think that little Hermione is Hermione's daughter (and wow, it can get quite confusing with two Hermione's around LOL)
Date: 04/21/2008 03:14 AM Title: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw
great story, looking forward to more chapters, altough the overbite thing is a bit strange seeing as they're dentists and btw dentists make more than engou money to take care of more than 1 child