Date: 09/03/2008 09:22 PM Title: Forty-two Months Later: Muggle Charms
I like this healing the past type thing you've got going with Petunia and Dudley. It's really nice. This was a great chapter.
Date: 09/02/2008 09:53 PM Title: Thirty Months Later: Thestral
Hmm, still waters run deeply in Hagrid, don't they? I rather liked this chapter. Liked it very much in fact. Thank you.
Date: 09/02/2008 09:39 PM Title: Two Years Later: Dinner Date
“If Master wishes to be his own servant, Kreacher thinks Master should at least buy a fucking kitchen scale.” Ha, ha, ha! Unfortunately, I was drinking a cup of tea when I read that. First I almost spat, then, I swallowed wrong instead. I sat here gasping, choking and laughing all at once. That line was priceless!
Date: 09/02/2008 09:22 PM Title: Twenty-Two Months Later: Housewarming
That was so beautiful. I loved the way each experience was so different, and yet so perfect for the two different couples. I think you gave them what they would have written for themselves, given the chance.
Date: 09/02/2008 08:55 AM Title: Sixteen Months Later: Titan Arum
Tut, tut! Not nice going all preachy on us! (Even if Schrodinger's Cat is a fascinating argument.) And, any philosopher, or debater, worth his salt will tell you that the burden of proof lies with the believer.
Date: 09/01/2008 11:07 PM Title: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw
Wow! This first chapter is written so tightly that it could easily stand alone as a one-shot. But, I'm so glad that it doesn't! I'm off to read the rest of what you have to offer!
Author's Response:
Well, it actually WAS supposed to be a one-shot. lol It's the chapter I was missing from TDH, so I wrote it about 12 hours after I finished reading the book the first time out.
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2008 06:41 PM Title: Three Months Later - Our Little Wilkins
Well.
So much for sleeping tonight. Now I have this.
Very well done. That Ginny/Harry scene was...phenomenal. Can't wait to read it all.
Date: 07/21/2008 12:33 PM Title: Three Years Later: The Reception
i loved this story.. funny, like crying funny, and sad like crying sad...best i have seen so far:)
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2008 11:25 AM Title: Three Years Later: The Reception
Delightful chapter. All the various goings-on were very entertaining.
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2008 07:58 PM Title: Three Years Later: The Wedding
I Love Weddings! Very good chapter, especially the Dursleys.
Date: 06/24/2008 01:12 PM Title: Three Years Later: The Wedding
awesome update - love it
Date: 06/24/2008 10:52 AM Title: Three Years Later: The Wedding
Great chapter I'm so glad thery got married together. I always pictured a double wedding when I read book seven. Can't wait for the next chapter. How many chapter is there in this fic anyways?
Author's Response: Count as I see it is at 42 or 43 chapters, 19 years, when all is said and done.
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 07:56 PM Title: Two Years Later: Dinner Date
Very enjoyable. Quite real sounding. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06/05/2008 11:47 AM Title: Two Years Later: Dinner Date
great update!
I can't wait to read about Harry's reunion with Petunia
Date: 06/03/2008 04:59 PM Title: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw
Your Kreacher is too perfect. What a hoot. “If Master wishes to be his own servant, Kreacher thinks Master should at least buy a f-ing kitchen scale.”
Then you got me laughing again with this one: “Yeah, Kreach, pull up a chair,” said Ron. “Enjoy some disgrace with the rest of us blood traitors,”
You do a good job differentiating between dialog styles with your characters.
This seemed like a chapter designed to set up the story to go somewhere. It was rather tame after the last one. Looking forward to more of those already-written chapters.