Date: 04/21/2008 09:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm... A little more experienced when we get to the first chapter of the story huh? Please, update soon. I totally don't understand what Ron is doing or thinking! (And also, I want to see Hermione with David again!)
Ha! Ha! Yeah Hermione is alot more experienced in the first chapter! As for David you'll get your wish when my next chapter comes out. There is also a chapter that I already wrote that explains alot about what happened with Ron.(it'll be awhile getting there)
I can't wait to hear from you again!
Date: 04/21/2008 06:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I love Live or Die Trying and this out take was wonderful. "Her heart and body were his now." Amazing line! I can't wait to read more of the story. Your characterization of Ron and Hermione is brilliant. Cheers!
Thank you for your comments. I will probably do a few more "back stories" from time to time to explain things. I hope to keep you reading!