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Reviewer: TaMara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 09:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm... A little more experienced when we get to the first chapter of the story huh?  Please, update soon.  I totally don't understand what Ron is doing or thinking!  (And also, I want to see Hermione with David again!)



Author's Response:

Hi TaMara!

   Ha! Ha! Yeah Hermione is alot more experienced in the first chapter! As for David you'll get your wish when my next chapter comes out. There is also a chapter that I already wrote that explains alot about what happened with Ron.(it'll be awhile getting there)

I can't wait to hear from you again!

missgranger *smile* 

Reviewer: vanessaweasley Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 06:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, I love Live or Die Trying and this out take was wonderful. "Her heart and body were his now." Amazing line! I can't wait to read more of the story. Your characterization of Ron and Hermione is brilliant. Cheers! 



Author's Response:

Hi vanessaweasley!

   Thank you for your comments. I will probably do a few more "back stories" from time to time to explain things. I hope to keep you reading!

missgranger *smile* 

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