Date: 05/11/2008 06:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely beautiful. First time sex is not easy to write, much less to write it in first person. You have done a splendid job of capturing the very essense of Ron/Hermione and bringing forth a story that is beautifully told, extremely well written, and very emotionally charged. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a positive review. I really got involved in writing it, and I'm glad that the effort has paid off, that you can see what I was trying to achieve.
Date: 05/11/2008 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story and the emotions expressed between Ron and Hermione leading them together.
Author's Response: I imagine that emotions would have to run high after the day they have had, and thank you for seeing that in the story, and for your review.
Date: 04/22/2008 09:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Since I keep reading this over & over ever since it appeared, I should really tell you how lovely it is--how right and natural and true. It's so obvious that there was going to be shock and PTSD for them and many others. I love all your details (Hermione casting the usual protective spells), and their finding goodness and life, and by extension defiance of death, in each other is beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you. I put a good deal of effort and thought into it, and I am so glad that you appreciate what I was trying to convey :)