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Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 01:22 PM Title: None for Me, Thank You (One Shot)

I like it :)

bittersweet story which screams for another chapter *hint* 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely review!  I'll definitely think about doing another one!  :o)

*treacle tart for you* 

Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 10:41 AM Title: None for Me, Thank You (One Shot)

Hey hon.  This was so well done, Risie!  You did a nice job of capturing that cognitive dissonance between wanting to be happy for your friend but feeling that horrible jealousy creeping up. I agree that you should write the story of when she does see her blue lines and tells the others. A nice bit of closure that I know many of us need.

 ((HUGS))



Author's Response:

Hi there!  :o)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, dear one.  I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed this piece and also want a follow-up fic.  I had no idea so many people would want that!  It's amazing how closure can come in the most unexpected places sometimes, yeah?  Thanks for your kind words!  ::hugs you::

*toffee bits for you* 

Reviewer: Baby Boomer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 06:28 AM Title: None for Me, Thank You (One Shot)

Extremely well written.  I love Ron's "rude gesture."  In re-watching GOF for the zillionth time, I just caught on that Ron raised his hand to flip off Fred and George for laughing at him when McGonagall was teaching him to dance.  She caught his hand and pulled it back to her waist.  I love Hermione/Ginny "girls talk".  I'd love a sequel to this, where Hermione finally sees the lines she's been dreaming of.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I love that moment in the movie too and this was a bit of a throw-back to that.  Nice to see you caught it.  :o)  Thank you for your comments on the Hermione/Ginny friendship.  I'm thinking about a couple sequels to this, so you may see something in the future.  Thanks again! 

*strawberry pie for you* 

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 03:26 AM Title: None for Me, Thank You (One Shot)

Gah! This is heartbreaking, gutwrenching stuff, and I really want to see more moments from this universe. I want to see Ron and Hermione telling Harry and Ginny. I want to see Hermione and Ron finally learn that their offspring are on the way. Gorgeous, gorgeous stuff.

Author's Response:

Oh!  ::hugs::  Thank you, dear friend, for reading and commenting!  I'm so glad to know you enjoyed it and want to see more of it.  I'm tossing around some ideas for a couple more pieces in this universe, but I know I have other stuff that needs to be written first.  Thanks for letting me know it's wanted though! 

*chocolate frog for you* 

Reviewer: CrumpleHornedKiwi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 01:53 AM Title: None for Me, Thank You (One Shot)

That was beautiful, and exactly the thought process you go through.  Happy for other but so jealous and angry that it isn't you. 

 Well done



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely review!  I think it's a set of feelings that is familiar to (sadly) a lot of people).  ::hugs::  Thanks again! 

*chocolate cake for you* 

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