Date: 02/24/2008 01:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Overall, I was really enjoying your story, until I got to the end. The summary page says it's completed, but I can't imagine that you'd actually leave it where you stopped. It's not actually finished, is it? There is real potential here to turn it into so much more, and so much "unfinished business" left behind.
Author's Response: It IS finished, but there are 13 more chapters to this. Just waiting for the beta team to hurry back to me. Don't worry. It's not finished on this site yet.