Date: 02/22/2008 08:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very well written and sexy, but even more importantly here, I think, is that it is a beautifully touching piece ... once that could easily serve as a "missing moment" in OoTP. Honestly, for poor Sirius' sake, I hope it happened just like that!
Date: 02/22/2008 06:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is really rather touching, which I was not expecting when I read the summary. I think you do Sirius justice here, and I really like how the depths of his thoughts and emotions resonate throughout the narration while nothing he actually betrays with words would reflect them- he maintains the expected exterior, which makes this become both beautiful and sad. Lovely, lovely story.