Date: 02/17/2008 08:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Your Shakspearean speech is a bit hard to swallow, I'd work more to keep the speakers in character and let the iambic pentametre fall where it may. But that's me, you do what feels right to you, and I'll read it!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it!